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Sven
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0 posted 11-29-1999 11:59 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

I wrote this in French. . . I don't really know why. . . I have included my original in French and an English translation. . . you should also know that I speak very little French, but it just seemed right for this poem. . .

Sven


Parfois, il est difficile de dormir,
particulieremnet quand vous n'etes pas la.
Je pourrais avoir un reve de vous
mais la douleur
peut etre beaucoup plus que je puis soutenir.

Anisi, je retourne et regarde votre cote du lit.
Je vois votre impression dans le matelas
que je puis commencer pour faire dheors votre societe
et je commerce
a sentir votre caresse douce.

Et puis, vous etes la ave moi
votre sourire chauffant mon coeur tellement maintenant
je reve avec vous
et je sais que nous
ne separerons jamis.

DREAMING WITH YOU

Sometimes, it's hard to sleep
Especially when you're not there
I could have a dream of you
But the pain
can be more than I can bear.

So, I turn over and look at your side of the bed.
I see your imprint in the mattress
I can begin to make out your form
And I begin
to feel your soft caress.

And then, you're there with me,
Your smile warms my heart
So now, I'm dreaming with you
And I know
that we'll never part.

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

© Copyright 1999 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 11-29-1999 12:08 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Le reve, c'est triste
La solite
La cresse, plus douce
Au revene

Sorry, rusty French
And no dictionary
Hope you get the point
Anyway, this is beautiful!

Elizabeth
Sven
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2 posted 11-29-1999 01:37 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Yes I did Elizabeth. . .

merci, mon ami. . .

Sven. .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Justbleu
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3 posted 11-30-1999 11:25 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Tres Bien, Sven!!
J'aime votre poeme!!
Je parle francais un peu aussi mon ami!!
Au revoir pour maintenant!!

Brigitte ou Bridgette

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart."
Denise
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4 posted 11-30-1999 11:31 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, Sven. Both versions, I'm sure, but I only understand the english!

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Denise

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5 posted 12-01-1999 03:33 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you my friends. . .language has always fascinated me. . .I may post in other languages. . . we'll see. .

Sven

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 12-01-1999 06:59 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sven,
Like it in both languages.
Sunshine
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7 posted 12-01-1999 08:20 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Your talents will enhance us all. Thank you, Sven.
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