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When Souls Get Lost

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broker6
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0 posted 11-29-1999 09:39 AM       View Profile for broker6   Email broker6   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for broker6


When Souls Get Lost
by Richard J. Budig 1997


I've been looking for the peace
You bring to me in the night
For the touch of your hand
For the quiet you bring to my heart
I've been waiting for your voice
To call me out of this dark place
I need you to hold me
In that hour just before dawn
That time when souls get lost
And cannot find their way home

© Copyright 1999 broker6 - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 11-29-1999 11:49 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

That exquisite moment. You say it well

Elizabeth
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2 posted 11-29-1999 05:18 PM       View Profile for Jewl_24_1999   Email Jewl_24_1999   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Jewl_24_1999

Just beautiful...
Dusk Treader
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3 posted 11-29-1999 06:23 PM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

Touching little piece, greatly enjoyed, thanks

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Dark Angel
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4 posted 11-29-1999 06:46 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Beautiful Broker6, Just beautiful!!

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Ohme
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5 posted 11-29-1999 08:17 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Lovely.
RobertB
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6 posted 11-29-1999 08:20 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

very good Richard
Denise
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7 posted 11-30-1999 12:20 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful!

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poetFemmeFatale
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8 posted 11-30-1999 01:06 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Oh wow, my soul likes this one very much! Very nice thought shared in so few words! Exquisite!!

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9 posted 12-01-1999 10:28 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

Your work is sooooo lovely!

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Rachel_A
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10 posted 12-01-1999 11:07 AM       View Profile for Rachel_A   Email Rachel_A   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rachel_A

wow...that tugs at me...and that's what poetry should do....
RSEvans
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11 posted 12-01-1999 11:41 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

I felt this one
 
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