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broker6
Member

since 1999-11-07

Posts 132
Bellevue, NE, Sarpy

0 posted 1999-11-29 09:39 AM

When Souls Get Lost
by © Richard J. Budig 1997

I've been looking for the peace
You bring to me in the night
For the touch of your hand
For the quiet you bring to my heart
I've been waiting for your voice
To call me out of this dark place
I need you to hold me
In that hour just before dawn
That time when souls get lost
And cannot find their way home

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

1 posted 1999-11-29 11:49 AM

That exquisite moment. You say it well

Elizabeth

Jewl_24_1999
Member

since 1999-10-24

Posts 64
USA

2 posted 1999-11-29 05:18 PM

Just beautiful...

Dusk Treader

Moderator

Senior Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 1187
St. Paul, MN

3 posted 1999-11-29 06:23 PM

Touching little piece, greatly enjoyed, thanks

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"Human pride sings a vengeful song, inspired by the times you've been walked on" - Creed - "What If"

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 1999-11-29 06:46 PM

Beautiful Broker6, Just beautiful!!

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

5 posted 1999-11-29 08:17 PM

Lovely.

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

6 posted 1999-11-29 08:20 PM

very good Richard

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

7 posted 1999-11-30 12:20 PM

Beautiful!

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Denise

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

8 posted 1999-11-30 01:06 AM

Oh wow, my soul likes this one very much! Very nice thought shared in so few words! Exquisite!!

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

9 posted 1999-12-01 10:28 AM

Your work is sooooo lovely!

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Rachel_A
Member

since 1999-11-30

Posts 70
North Webster, IN USA

10 posted 1999-12-01 11:07 AM

wow...that tugs at me...and that's what poetry should do....

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

11 posted 1999-12-01 11:41 AM

I felt this one

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