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Michael
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0 posted 1999-11-29 03:26 AM


DIVINITY

Energies crest
Across the skies,
Ever to rest
Upon your eyes.
That shining light
Releasing spark,
Forever bright,
Assailing Dark.
The fate in hand,
Souls torn afore.
We dare demand
Tempt Fate once more.
The aura rings,
Angelic blue.
As heaven sings
Of one from two.
Lovers, star crossed,
Meet Destiny.
From chaos, lost,
Divinity.
From deep blue tears
Of ocean sky.
From endless years
Wondering, "why".
Passions collide,
Burst bright and bold.
The welkin pride,
A vault of gold...
Bears witness through -
Two stars, now one,
Shining anew,
Bright as the sun.


For My Femme.
I read your "Cosmic Collision ", it hit very deeply. Thank you, babe, for the light you have shone into my life. I hope my reply reveals all intended to you.

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Michael Anderson

Loneliness isn't in being alone,
Loneliness is alone in being.





[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 11-29-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Michael Anderson - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 1999-11-29 03:33 AM


Well now, this rhyme again is one that stopped me cold. Read it again to absorb each nuance I did. 'Tis a wondrous tribute to an equally wondrous feeling my friend.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

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Poet deVine
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2 posted 1999-11-29 08:35 AM


Superb use of words, Michael!

Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 1999-11-29 08:46 AM


From poet's pen to angelic blue
Seem's like divinity is you

Elizabeth

RSEvans
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4 posted 1999-11-29 09:03 AM


Good one, Michael. The mystery of love that makes us all feel so small in its entirity.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.

lostboy
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5 posted 1999-11-29 09:23 AM


Beatiful words from one to another Michael.
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 1999-11-29 09:44 AM


Michael,
This poem struck me in the heart,
And spread to every little part.
Exquisite.

WhtDove
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7 posted 1999-11-29 10:04 AM


You've done it again! Great one!
poetFemmeFatale
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8 posted 1999-11-29 06:40 PM


**biggest sigh!** Well now, it's nice to be back in the groove of writing in reply to eachother's work....which is how my heart found you in the first place! Makes me smile huge! And what a beautiful comeback...Thank you. I don't know what it was that made me see us as cosmic all of a sudden, but wow, am I glad I did...it puts a whole different *spark* on things! I just work everyday to try and keep your spirits up, and your faith enduring - I always want to see smiles on your face. I wait impatiently for the day we meet in Dallas for our trip. Again, thank you for this poem - it matches beautifully against mine....

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale


Dark Angel
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9 posted 1999-11-29 07:06 PM


Well Done Michael, loved this too.

And PFF yes this poem does match beautifully against yours

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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10 posted 1999-11-29 08:06 PM


Very nice, Michael.

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Severn
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11 posted 1999-11-29 08:14 PM


Beautiful. Sigh...

Memories chase each other
cool as breezes
but to know
that such a thing
can actually be genuine
gives hope
in a sometimes berefted
heart such as
what I carry...


Denise
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12 posted 1999-11-29 08:20 PM


Simply divine! Beautiful, Michael!

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Denise


Michael
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13 posted 1999-11-30 03:34 AM


Thank you ALL for such warm replies...but Femme truly deserves all credit for this one.

Michael

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