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Michael
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0 posted 11-29-1999 03:26 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Michael

DIVINITY

Energies crest
Across the skies,
Ever to rest
Upon your eyes.
That shining light
Releasing spark,
Forever bright,
Assailing Dark.
The fate in hand,
Souls torn afore.
We dare demand
Tempt Fate once more.
The aura rings,
Angelic blue.
As heaven sings
Of one from two.
Lovers, star crossed,
Meet Destiny.
From chaos, lost,
Divinity.
From deep blue tears
Of ocean sky.
From endless years
Wondering, "why".
Passions collide,
Burst bright and bold.
The welkin pride,
A vault of gold...
Bears witness through -
Two stars, now one,
Shining anew,
Bright as the sun.


For My Femme.
I read your "Cosmic Collision ", it hit very deeply. Thank you, babe, for the light you have shone into my life. I hope my reply reveals all intended to you.

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Michael Anderson

Loneliness isn't in being alone,
Loneliness is alone in being.





[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 11-29-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Michael Anderson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-29-1999 03:33 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Well now, this rhyme again is one that stopped me cold. Read it again to absorb each nuance I did. 'Tis a wondrous tribute to an equally wondrous feeling my friend.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ
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because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

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2 posted 11-29-1999 08:35 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Superb use of words, Michael!
Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 11-29-1999 08:46 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

From poet's pen to angelic blue
Seem's like divinity is you

Elizabeth
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4 posted 11-29-1999 09:03 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

Good one, Michael. The mystery of love that makes us all feel so small in its entirity.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.
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5 posted 11-29-1999 09:23 AM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Beatiful words from one to another Michael.
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6 posted 11-29-1999 09:44 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Michael,
This poem struck me in the heart,
And spread to every little part.
Exquisite.
WhtDove
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7 posted 11-29-1999 10:04 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

You've done it again! Great one!
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8 posted 11-29-1999 06:40 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

**biggest sigh!** Well now, it's nice to be back in the groove of writing in reply to eachother's work....which is how my heart found you in the first place! Makes me smile huge! And what a beautiful comeback...Thank you. I don't know what it was that made me see us as cosmic all of a sudden, but wow, am I glad I did...it puts a whole different *spark* on things! I just work everyday to try and keep your spirits up, and your faith enduring - I always want to see smiles on your face. I wait impatiently for the day we meet in Dallas for our trip. Again, thank you for this poem - it matches beautifully against mine....

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

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9 posted 11-29-1999 07:06 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Well Done Michael, loved this too.

And PFF yes this poem does match beautifully against yours

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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Very nice, Michael.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 11-29-1999 08:14 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Beautiful. Sigh...

Memories chase each other
cool as breezes
but to know
that such a thing
can actually be genuine
gives hope
in a sometimes berefted
heart such as
what I carry...

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12 posted 11-29-1999 08:20 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Simply divine! Beautiful, Michael!

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Denise

Michael
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13 posted 11-30-1999 03:34 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Thank you ALL for such warm replies...but Femme truly deserves all credit for this one.

Michael
 
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