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You make me smile |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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You make me smile Your output of rhyming rhyme, falls My mind to a slaves enthrall. Bowing to all the flow of words, Like wings in flight of flying birds. The rhythm is magnificent. They fly and fly in awes invent. I wonder how your mind in wend Can flow so long without an end. You are creating an Amazon In truth to me a paragon. I am in awe of your display, In words and thought and repartee. Prolific, that I would declare, Terrific, that I know is there. And specific is the marvels bed, Glancing out the water shed. I love your file I love your style. You are to me the master wile. |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Very nice work! I like how this makes you sort of think to quite understand each line  Me anyways... I may just be a little different than most... lol Nice work ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Ah Sy, I know who you write of - I too, have admired her work of late....I agree with you completely, and what a fabulous little ditty you've created here too! BRAVO! ------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I too know who you write of and she is a beautiful poet - as are you - continue your sparring it's great to follow! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, I was early to bed and early to rise And late to get this nice surprise And late to hear you eulogize And fast to get a tear in eyes And not agreeing with the wise And I don't mean to criticize My pen soars rapid through the skies But my quipping may be my demise Thank you for the lovely poem It touched my heart Elizabeth |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Geesh....You people must be writing poetry in your sleep - Do you dream in rhyme too??? |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
If you are dreaming, keep it up. I soak up the poetry like a sponge. |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Made me smile! Very east to relate to this. Nice work! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, You should know that all the while Your poetry brings on a smile Not for the petals that you throw But for the rose from which they grow Not for the eulogies you send But for the magic of the pen Not for the waters sweet refrain But for the font from which it came No other poet can wield a word And twist a phrase so sweetly heard But all this magic has a source And that is you, the poet of course The man behind the poem's grace Is the one who brings a smiling face And I'm smiling Elizabeth [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 11-29-1999).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Geez, you both make everyone grin wide. No wonder people here at work are staring at me! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sunshine, Don't tell me you do this at work!? And incidently, when does Marge ever sleep? Glad you're having fun! Elizabeth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThUnDeRkYsS, I think you read between the lines And that to me is just fine. Thank you much. Pff, I think we touch not enough, I really, really like your stuff. thanks *L* Severn, Beauty lies were beauty lies These are only beauty sighs. *L* Nan, You are the best and the answer is yes. *L* Ohme, Drain the sponge there is more to come. Thank you for the comment. lostboy, May your smiles out do your frowns, thank you. Lizzy, Your smile does wonders for my pen And will make you smile again and again. But the waters that run so swift for thee Are much, much to swift for me. An avalanche has cought me up And I miss my walks among the buttercups. Please don't reprimand this old man My wings only fly for a very short span So bless you my Eizabeth, I will do the best that I can. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You always do just fine, Seymour! Thank you both for the smile in my heart! ------------------ Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Smiling here Sy.... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise and Pepper, I want to thank you before this child goes to sleep. |
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