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You make me smile

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 11-28-1999 11:17 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

You make me smile

Your output of rhyming rhyme, falls
My mind to a slaves enthrall.
Bowing to all the flow of words,
Like wings in flight of flying birds.

The rhythm is magnificent.
They fly and fly in awes invent.
I wonder how your mind in wend
Can flow so long without an end.

You are creating an Amazon
In truth to me a paragon.
I am in awe of your display,
In words and thought and repartee.

Prolific, that I would declare,
Terrific, that I know is there.
And specific is the marvels bed,
Glancing out the water shed.

I love your file I love your style.
You are to me the master wile.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
ThUnDeRkYsS
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1 posted 11-28-1999 11:23 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Very nice work! I like how this makes you sort of think to quite understand each line Me anyways... I may just be a little different than most... lol Nice work

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be
poetFemmeFatale
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2 posted 11-29-1999 01:20 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Ah Sy, I know who you write of - I too, have admired her work of late....I agree with you completely, and what a fabulous little ditty you've created here too! BRAVO!

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

Severn
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3 posted 11-29-1999 04:49 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I too know who you write of and she is a beautiful poet - as are you - continue your sparring it's great to follow!
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 11-29-1999 06:59 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy,
I was early to bed and early to rise
And late to get this nice surprise
And late to hear you eulogize
And fast to get a tear in eyes
And not agreeing with the wise
And I don't mean to criticize
My pen soars rapid through the skies
But my quipping may be my demise

Thank you for the lovely poem
It touched my heart
Elizabeth
Nan
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5 posted 11-29-1999 07:26 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Geesh....You people must be writing poetry in your sleep - Do you dream in rhyme too???
Ohme
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6 posted 11-29-1999 10:55 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

If you are dreaming, keep it up. I soak up the poetry like a sponge.
lostboy
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7 posted 11-29-1999 11:01 AM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Made me smile! Very east to relate to this. Nice work!
Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 11-29-1999 11:05 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy,
You should know that all the while
Your poetry brings on a smile
Not for the petals that you throw
But for the rose from which they grow
Not for the eulogies you send
But for the magic of the pen
Not for the waters sweet refrain
But for the font from which it came
No other poet can wield a word
And twist a phrase so sweetly heard
But all this magic has a source
And that is you, the poet of course
The man behind the poem's grace
Is the one who brings a smiling face

And I'm smiling

Elizabeth



[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 11-29-1999).]
Sunshine
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9 posted 11-29-1999 11:49 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Geez, you both make everyone grin wide. No wonder people here at work are staring at me!
Elizabeth Santos
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10 posted 11-29-1999 11:51 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sunshine,
Don't tell me you do this at work!?
And incidently, when does Marge ever sleep?
Glad you're having fun!
Elizabeth
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 11-29-1999 11:53 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

ThUnDeRkYsS,
I think you read between the lines
And that to me is just fine. Thank you much.
Pff,
I think we touch not enough,
I really, really like your stuff. thanks *L*
Severn,
Beauty lies were beauty lies
These are only beauty sighs. *L*
Nan,
You are the best and the answer is yes. *L*
Ohme,
Drain the sponge there is more to come.
Thank you for the comment.
lostboy,
May your smiles out do your frowns, thank you.
Lizzy,
Your smile does wonders for my pen
And will make you smile again and again.
But the waters that run so swift for thee
Are much, much to swift for me.
An avalanche has cought me up
And I miss my walks among the buttercups.
Please don't reprimand this old man
My wings only fly for a very short span
So bless you my Eizabeth,
I will do the best that I can.

Denise
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12 posted 11-29-1999 07:29 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

You always do just fine, Seymour! Thank you both for the smile in my heart!

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Denise

Pepper
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13 posted 11-29-1999 07:35 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Smiling here Sy....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 11-29-1999 09:57 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Denise and Pepper,
I want to thank you before this child goes to sleep.
 
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