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We Are Unique

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Eloise
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As I set my emotions free,
I wonder where they will take me.
Will I wander to a happy place?
Or will a tear fall upon my face?

I look to the future, but I can't see that far.
Then I look at the past and I see many scars.
Gone are the moments of the past.
Time keeps passing by so fast.

We need to take time to sit and laugh.
And look through the eyes of our other half.
For there's a child hidden in the depth of our soul.
Let him out and let him take control.

You may be surprised at what you may find.
For we are all unique, and one of a kind.
So stop being a puppet on a string.
Let loose and do your own thing.
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Pepper
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1 posted 11-28-1999 09:51 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Like this much, I do...especially like the third stanza Eloise.....

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2 posted 11-28-1999 09:54 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Unique indeed.
A wonderful rhyme.
It warms this childish
heart of mine.

Very nice, Eloise.
I like very much.

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John Yaws
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Lovely, ma'am. I really enjoyed it.

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Ohme
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4 posted 11-29-1999 07:35 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Eloise, I do think I am unique. But when I let the child in me have control I get myself in trouble. LOL Still, I'm not a puppet. Lovely poem.
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