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Through the eyes of a stranger... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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Through the eyes of a stranger one can appear to be whole or they can look beyond the words and see a haunted soul We are what life has made us and I, like you take pleasure in the sound of a kitten's meow or the kindesses we treasure We each bring a hug and a smile because of how much we care the past doesn't matter, you do the hand's extended to see us through Sometime soon things will change and once more we'll smile again but until that time arrives make use of this loving chain..  ------------------ There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it... [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 11-28-1999).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful sentiments, Rainbow! You surely bring a smile to me all the time! ------------------ Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very lovely, rainbow Elizabeth |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Rainbow, I think I'll grab the chain. ------------------ Lorene Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me, it will beat the heck out of day before yesterday! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rainbow - The eyes of the stranger look to become a friend. All that you were or are is all that I take in. Loving hand extended, wanting you to grasp it. Your friendship I'm longing, to weave into friendships basket. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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cjs9853 Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 44smyrna, tn usa. |
beautiful :-) i love it.you know how to make people smile. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Denise: I was so busy concentrating on saying what I felt, I forgot it didn't rhyme and just realised, but who cares, it's the thought that counts, right?.. and I'm glad I make you smile, truly!HUGS Elizabeth: Thank you.. HUGS Ohme: well my teenager friend...*g*...feel free to join hands... HUGS ------------------ There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it... |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Simply lovely Rainbow..... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, Rainbow, it is definitely the thought that counts! [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 11-28-1999).] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thank you Marge.. Friendship is what we weave.. HUGS CJS: I can't get used to my sister being here... and I'm talking to your son right now....he is so nice, he's a real pleasure to talk to...my nephew..!!! Wow!I love you ------------------ There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it... [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 11-28-1999).] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Pepper: Thank you sweetheart...I'm so euphoric....my nephew, he was only a toddler last I spoke and now he's a grown up loving man...wow!...all my dreams and I'm not dreaming...ooops...shut up Rainbow...;-))))) HUSG ------------------ There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it... |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Well, at 3 am you could have been dreaming you night owl ! ... it's good to see you happy ... ... now, when do you hop in the plane and cross the ocean ?CJS, welcome here ... |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
oooops, I forgot *g* ... lovely poem ... HUSG |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
How heartfelt - as is all your work RG. |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
i've been very weak lately...hope that if I grab this chain it will give me courage. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Consider me part of the chain gang, Rainbow. Excellent thoughts here. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Drat it, Balladeer!!! All my great thoughts went scampering away to the tune of "That's the sound of the men working on the chain gang!" (And if you could hear my singing, you'd be scampering, too! LOL) Welcome, CJS!!! Your sister is much loved... and deservedly so! *G* Okay, now... to the poem... (Sorry, RG... it's Deer's fault! *G*) Beautiful job... I especially like the first verse... someone seeing our soul complete with flaws... and loving us anyway! *G* |
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cjs9853 Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 44smyrna, tn usa. |
thanks for making me feel welcome:-) [This message has been edited by cjs9853 (edited 11-29-1999).] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
JTF: LOL, I see you can work the clock back..*g*.. HUSG Severn: Thanks sweetheart.. HUGS Miriam: Weak or loving? Hold on..Think of something you can make happen and make it happen and then congratulate yourself for having achieved it.. HUGS Bal: Is that a chain saw..*g*..I guess you could say this was a link across the world.. HUSG Suthern: Is that the sound of scampering feet I hear..*g*..Bless you my friend.. HUGGIES CJS: The welcome is extended by all, it's pretty much a family here... And I'm so glad you're here.. HUGS ------------------ There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it... [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 11-29-1999).] |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
I just grabbed onto the chain too. It's so nice to know it exists and how much love it's radiating. Thanks for this link Rainbow! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Lostboy: Just remember the price you have to pay...I want that *snow*...*g*...pleasure is all mine, anytime you need an ear, there's one waiting here.. HUGS ------------------ There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Rainbow, this is beautiful girl!! I'm hanging onto that chain. (((hugs)))------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
saw this earlier through some special eyes, but had to add my smiles, very nice RG |
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