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Watercolors (posted for Elizabeth Santos)

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RobertB
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0 posted 11-28-1999 08:50 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RobertB

Watercolors


A voice so soothing
to the point
of a calmness
unknown
letting colors flow
and run together
creating...
forming
a work of art
in tears.

RB


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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
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Ohme
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You paint a lovely picture as well.

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Lorene

Yesterday is history,
tomorrow just a mystery.
And if today is good to me,
it will beat the heck out of day before yesterday!

Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 11-28-1999 08:59 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Robert,
That is so sweet! You brought a tear,
Everyone tells me I have a very calm voice. Now, how did you pick that up from a written page? That's unbelievable.
Thank you so much
Elizabeth
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You have described her voice perfectly! Sweet and serene! Very good! How did you do that?!

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Denise

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This is stunning Robert....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

RobertB
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I wrote this quite a while back...but seeing the poem by Elizabeth with the word "watercolor" in it...made me think of this one.

I am glad it fits you Elizabeth!!

Robert

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
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Beautiful poem Robert
RobertB
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thank you Ruth!
Severn
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Love the mix of images here in so few words - great work.
RobertB
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I do want to make one thing clear...I am speaking of tears of joy, not sadness and pain.

Tears of joy are the wonderful liquid we can use to paint pictures of so many things.

Robert
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