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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA 
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Embrace Rock me to sleep with the rhythm of your heart, run your fingers through my hair. Bodies close, sharing breath in the final hours of today. Limbs tangled in a lover's knot. Impossible to say where you begin and I end. ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Tara, this is lovely.  ------------------ Lorene Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me, it will beat the heck out of day before yesterday! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A beautiful embrace! This is lovely, Tara! ------------------ Denise |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
'Tis a sweet embrace indeed you describe. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tara - Gosh, I like this. Can just see the intermingling of the limbs. Just lovely. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
This is beautiful ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Yes...so beautiful... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Tara...I absolutely love this. BRAVO!!! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Just as beautiful as it can be, Tara. I like those images. |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
very beautiful, Tara..I can almost feel the closeness of the two lovers with your words...oh, to be that intimate... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wonderful! Simple and eloquent. |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Excellent imagery Tara..liked much.. |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Thank you all for your comments! They are much appreciated. |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
UNBELIEVABLE! I have been searching for those exact words myself! I would enjoy very much hearing more from you. ------------------ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Great job, Tara!! |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Thanks for your enthusiasm, Brandonsdinmore! If you do a search with my name, you'll find some other stuff I've written. |
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