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jarid
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since 1999-11-28
Posts 7
Fulton,NY USA

0 posted 1999-11-28 05:32 PM


Wingless angel come rescue me.
Silents in my prison and the answers I can't see.
These feelings are like posion that tightens my chest.
And the three word that could set me free are three words that I can't express.
I love you is not that easy to say.
And the price of you finding out.
Is a price that I am to scared to pay
The pain of not holding you is killing my soul
but I am stoped b the fear that the highest stars have the hardest falls.

© Copyright 1999 jarid - All Rights Reserved
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-11-28 05:56 PM


Welcome to passions jarid!
This is a lovely poem, I can feel its sincerity through your words - I'll be looking out for more.

Ohme
Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
Texas
2 posted 1999-11-28 05:56 PM


Jarad, Welcome It is easy to say I love you. What is difficult is knowing if the person you are speaking to want to hear it.
Say it to your heart and when your heart tells you to speak the words, you will.


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Lorene

Yesterday is history,
tomorrow just a mystery.
And if today is good to me,
it will beat the heck out of day before yesterday!


Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-11-28 07:32 PM


Lovely poem, Jarid! Welcome to Passions!

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Denise


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