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Anticipation

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dvlishimp
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0 posted 11-28-1999 08:25 AM       View Profile for dvlishimp   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for dvlishimp

In Anticipation of seeing you
I am careful wash with extra attention
Smoothing the rough spots elbows and knees
that you may wish to caress
I leave the shower clean, moist, smooth
ready for your touch.

I find the right clothes for this moment
that accentuate the roundness of my breasts and hips.
I gather my auburn hair atop my head
allowing a tendril or two to fall framing my face.

A little powder...
a spot of brown on the outside corner of each eye.
The light blue of my eyes are ready to sink into your
dark browns.
A stroke of color on my lips in there usual pout
and then I wait for you...
for my heart to live again.
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1 posted 11-28-1999 03:40 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Great poem imp! Uhh...but this is the Prose section, so I'm-a-gonna scoot this on over to Open #4!
lostboy
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2 posted 11-28-1999 04:50 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

You had me on a cloud of imagery here. I can almost smell the powder and see the shade of your hair. Needless to say, I very much enjoyed this poem. Nice work!
 
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