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Lost Dreamer
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since 06-20-99
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Normal, Illinois


0 posted 11-28-1999 01:32 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I wrote this for my husband
for our 18th Anniversary.


With Your... I Am...

Design my destiny
with your...detailed mind
with you I am...whole

Cast away my shadows
with your...unending courage
with you I am...Strong

Soothe my aches and pains
with your...gentle touch
with you I am...eased

Reach out to catch me
with your...cradled arms
with you I am...secure

Mesmerize my senses
with your...sunshine smile
with you I am...happy

Gaze into my eyes
with your...gracious glance
with you I am...radiant

Speak the words I love you
with your...delicate voice
with you I am...loved

Massage my longing back
with your...determined fingertips
with you I am...delighted

Create for me a pillow
with your...relaxed body
with you I am...cushioned

Protect me from the nightmares
with your...cuddled embrace
with you I am...safe

Wake me in the morning
with your...kiss so soft
with you I am...blessed

Accompany me always
with your...caring thoughts
with you I am...thoughtful

Light my walkway
with your...peaceful love
with you I am...glorified
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ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 09-23-1999
Posts 739
Wisconsin


1 posted 11-28-1999 02:49 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

I am in awe. This is absolutely breathtaking. Almost made me teary eyed just to read it... What a beautiful tribute of your Love for each other! Wonderful Job

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be
Balladeer
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since 06-05-99
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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA


2 posted 11-28-1999 02:57 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Dreamer, to feel this way after 18 years is truly wonderful. I think this marriage has a chance! Beautiful job.
lostboy
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since 11-21-1999
Posts 284
New Hampshire, USA


3 posted 11-28-1999 03:37 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Very lovely poem Dreamer. Sure sounds like you both have a good thing going on. May your next 18 yrs be just as great!
doreen peri
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since 05-25-99
Posts 8028
Virginia


4 posted 11-28-1999 04:17 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

Gloria, this is absoutley beautiful! You are truly blessed to have a love so dear after so many years!

(ps- did i miss your anniversary?)
Denise
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5 posted 11-28-1999 07:00 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, this is beautiful, Gloria! Congratulations to the happy couple!

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Denise

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