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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 1999-11-28 01:32 PM


I wrote this for my husband
for our 18th Anniversary.


With Your... I Am...

Design my destiny
with your...detailed mind
with you I am...whole

Cast away my shadows
with your...unending courage
with you I am...Strong

Soothe my aches and pains
with your...gentle touch
with you I am...eased

Reach out to catch me
with your...cradled arms
with you I am...secure

Mesmerize my senses
with your...sunshine smile
with you I am...happy

Gaze into my eyes
with your...gracious glance
with you I am...radiant

Speak the words I love you
with your...delicate voice
with you I am...loved

Massage my longing back
with your...determined fingertips
with you I am...delighted

Create for me a pillow
with your...relaxed body
with you I am...cushioned

Protect me from the nightmares
with your...cuddled embrace
with you I am...safe

Wake me in the morning
with your...kiss so soft
with you I am...blessed

Accompany me always
with your...caring thoughts
with you I am...thoughtful

Light my walkway
with your...peaceful love
with you I am...glorified

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ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
1 posted 1999-11-28 02:49 PM


I am in awe. This is absolutely breathtaking. Almost made me teary eyed just to read it... What a beautiful tribute of your Love for each other! Wonderful Job

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be

Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
2 posted 1999-11-28 02:57 PM


Dreamer, to feel this way after 18 years is truly wonderful. I think this marriage has a chance! Beautiful job.
lostboy
Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA
3 posted 1999-11-28 03:37 PM


Very lovely poem Dreamer. Sure sounds like you both have a good thing going on. May your next 18 yrs be just as great!
doreen peri
Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
4 posted 1999-11-28 04:17 PM


Gloria, this is absoutley beautiful! You are truly blessed to have a love so dear after so many years!

(ps- did i miss your anniversary?)

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 1999-11-28 07:00 PM


Yes, this is beautiful, Gloria! Congratulations to the happy couple!

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Denise


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