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jarid
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since 1999-11-28
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Fulton,NY USA

0 posted 1999-11-28 01:05 PM


How can I tell you that I love you?
If I can't find the words.
How do I show you that I need you?
If I am paralyzed with fear.
If it took me yelling out to get your attention.
Then I would shout out to the world.
But it's the fear of your rejection that silents my words.
My questions to love,happieness,and peace are answered in you.
And I know the answers to your questions could be found in me to.
Maybe the time will come when I can tell you how I truly feel.
But it is so hard to accept a dream that is so far out of reach could actulely become real.

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lostboy
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since 1999-11-21
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1 posted 1999-11-28 02:37 PM


Cool one jarid. Dreams can come true and also true is that feeling of happiness and peace that can be found with the right person.
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2 posted 1999-11-28 02:42 PM


Jarid - Welcome to Passions.
Hope to see more of your work.
Dreams are never out of reach,
we just need to reach a little further.
Silent cries are just words that haven't been spoken yet.
When the time is right ... you will let your heart be known.

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ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
3 posted 1999-11-28 02:54 PM


Are you and I the same person? lol I know EXACTLY how you feel... I am in the SAME boat as you my friend. It is a hard, hard, stressful and painful spot to be. Hang in there though, all the answers to your questions are sure to come at the right times... I hope this true for me as well. Wonderful poem, well written and hit VERY close to home with this one.

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be

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