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I've Heard Whispers

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Marge Tindal
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I've Heard Whispers
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

I've heard whispers of a man,
who gave his life for me.
The stories meet me on the hills
of sweet reverie.

They tell me that he passed this way,
I searched, but did not find
the man of whom they speak,
is he only in my mind?

I go from place to place
I cannot find the man.
Tell me have you seen him,
somewhere across this land?

I look, I seek, I ask his path.
It's more than I can bear.
They smile at me and shake their heads
and say they know not where.

I travel the weary darkness,
this day has been the worst.
Tell him I am seeking him,
if you should meet him first.

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1 posted 11-28-1999 12:18 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Marge, this is beautiful, how do you come up with so much poetry in a day. It comes from a very creative mind and a loving heart
Elizabeth
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2 posted 11-28-1999 12:23 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh, Elizabeth - the heart keeps the words my fingers speak.



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You have a great heart
I would welcome its counterpart.
Sy
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Seymour - That's one heck of a compliment.
Thank you.

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You’ll see His footprints in the dew
Or after early rain
And sense His presence in the gloom
Of deep, enduring pain
And after death has touched your life
Or been inside your home
You’ll find His gentle comfort
When you are all alone
Art seeking ‘cause you’re weary?
And fears and doubts abound
Somewhere in the shadows
Jesus will be found.

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Marge Tindal
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Slinger - That's lovely. Thank you so much.

I wearied of searching,
no more able to roam.
Then HE FOUND ME ...
now, I'm not alone.

The tales were all true ...
This day is no longer the worst.
You must have met him on the trail
and sent him to quench my thirst.

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Marge - What a wonderful piece this is. We really are never all alone. He always manages one way or another to let us know He is there.
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Yes, He whispers in the heart! Very lovely, Marge!

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Denise

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Eloise - Right you are. He lives !

Denise - Yes, he whispers ... 'here I am, my child ... while you were looking for me ... I was searching your heart.'

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Beautiful, again Marge!

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Lorene

Yesterday is history,
tomorrow just a mystery.
And if today is good to me,
it will beat the heck out of day before yesterday!

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