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Real Woman

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spoongirl28
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since 10-24-1999
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FWB, FL USA


0 posted 11-28-1999 10:22 AM       View Profile for spoongirl28   Email spoongirl28   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spoongirl28

The mark of a true woman
So many people think
Is long sleek legs
And satiny, smooth cheeks

She must be thin
With a firm , tight butt
Nice rounded breasts
Looking "pedigree" and not "mutt"

But I'm here to tell you
Thats not reality
A TRUE woman is made
Of many more things, you see

You will occassionally see
Dark cirlces under her eyes.
From staying up late
And calming little cries.

Her hair will be neat
Though not always styled.
If she claims to have "time"
She is surely in denial!

Her legs might be long
But not always tight.....
And lots of stretch marks
Are kept out of sight!

Her breasts slightly sag
From the children shes' nursed.
But she can still produce cleavage
And shes' always ready first.

In one single hour
She can handle 5 things.
Be a chauffer, cook, and doctor
Therapist, friend, and still sing!

Theres' a smile on her face
Even though she is beat
Shes' a mother, lover, and friend.....
A REAL woman.....thats me!

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Spoongirl28

The time to live is now......
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lostboy
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since 11-21-1999
Posts 284
New Hampshire, USA


1 posted 11-28-1999 10:26 AM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

What a really cool poem, all us guys should remember this one. Nice work spoongirl!
danni
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since 11-20-1999
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wisconsin


2 posted 11-28-1999 10:38 AM       View Profile for danni   Email danni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for danni

Wonderful poem. And how true it is. Chalk one up for all the real women. I am also the friend, the mother, and the lover (well, hopefully i'll eventually be someones lover
Deep Blue Me
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3 posted 11-30-1999 10:50 AM       View Profile for Deep Blue Me   Email Deep Blue Me   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deep Blue Me

Noted. Understood. Grasped.

Good to hear from you again, spoon.

DB
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4 posted 11-30-1999 10:50 AM       View Profile for Deep Blue Me   Email Deep Blue Me   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deep Blue Me

Noted. Understood. Grasped.

Good to hear from you again, spoon.

DB
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5 posted 11-30-1999 10:51 AM       View Profile for Deep Blue Me   Email Deep Blue Me   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deep Blue Me

Noted. Understood. Grasped.

Good to hear from you again, spoon.

DB
spoongirl28
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6 posted 12-01-1999 04:44 AM       View Profile for spoongirl28   Email spoongirl28   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spoongirl28

Thanks DB......it feels good to be back!

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