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Hopeless (ful?) Romantic

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lostboy
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0 posted 11-28-1999 09:51 AM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for lostboy

What could have happened
To make me this way
I've been struck
In the strangest way
Tell me the answers
I've got to know why
I need to make my peace
Before I cry

Say you've been searching
For love that's built to last
Around the world and back
Burden free from past
To feel your body
And tremble when I say
Mia raggazza bella
Io te amo sempre

Love, don't come come any easier
Give me all you've got to give
There's so much more to life to live
Love, don't come any easier
No spoken words can truly say
How love can help us find our way

(last 2 lines, 2nd verse: my beautiful girl, I love you always, in Italian if anyone was wondering!)
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Justbleu
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1 posted 11-28-1999 09:56 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I liked this a lot....the italian gave it a little something extra!! Well Done!!

Oh, by the way!! Sounds kind of hopeful to me!!

Bridgette

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart."
danni
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2 posted 11-28-1999 10:21 AM       View Profile for danni   Email danni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for danni

"I,ve been searching for love that's built to last." Another good one lostboy. Like I've said before, I relate all to well to your sentiments.
lostboy
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3 posted 11-28-1999 10:36 AM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Thank you Bridgette and danni, you're really sweet. Hopeful? yeah, I think so too. And I think it's really cool to be able to sentimentally relate to someone.
Dolphins3
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4 posted 11-29-1999 11:27 AM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dolphins3

Great Poem Lostboy. I enjoy reading your work. Cheryl
lostboy
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5 posted 11-29-1999 12:02 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Thanks Cheryl, I appreciated it!!
A Romantic Heart
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6 posted 11-30-1999 01:30 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

This was very romantic lostboy, I loved the Italian line...my name just happens to be mianna...Your poems are a mirror to my own thoughts and feelings...kind of scary for me to read the same feelings only written from anothers heart.

I enjoyed and related to every word! Nicely done
 
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