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Hopeless (ful?) Romantic
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Hopeless (ful?) Romantic |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
What could have happened To make me this way I've been struck In the strangest way Tell me the answers I've got to know why I need to make my peace Before I cry Say you've been searching For love that's built to last Around the world and back Burden free from past To feel your body And tremble when I say Mia raggazza bella Io te amo sempre Love, don't come come any easier Give me all you've got to give There's so much more to life to live Love, don't come any easier No spoken words can truly say How love can help us find our way (last 2 lines, 2nd verse: my beautiful girl, I love you always, in Italian if anyone was wondering!) |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I liked this a lot....the italian gave it a little something extra!! Well Done!!  Oh, by the way!! Sounds kind of hopeful to me!! Bridgette ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart." |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
"I,ve been searching for love that's built to last." Another good one lostboy. Like I've said before, I relate all to well to your sentiments. |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Thank you Bridgette and danni, you're really sweet. Hopeful? yeah, I think so too. And I think it's really cool to be able to sentimentally relate to someone. |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
Great Poem Lostboy. I enjoy reading your work. Cheryl |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Thanks Cheryl, I appreciated it!! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This was very romantic lostboy, I loved the Italian line...my name just happens to be mianna...Your poems are a mirror to my own thoughts and feelings...kind of scary for me to read the same feelings only written from anothers heart. I enjoyed and related to every word! Nicely done |
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