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Enchanting Light

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danni
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0 posted 11-28-1999 02:12 AM       View Profile for danni   Email danni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for danni

The gentle soothing glow
of the candle's flame
keeps me in its reign

It's romanticising dance
swaying with serenity
holds me in a trance

The way the shadows fall
upon unknowing walls
disguising of all flaws

Amidst this wonderous light
resides the peaceful realm
in which I've come to dwell

The longing to reach deeper
inside my now quiet mind
erasing reality and time

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forgive me, I was surrounded by candles when I wrote this. what can I say, I was inspired
© Copyright 1999 Dannielle - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 11-28-1999 05:58 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

This is lovely, danni - I'll be looking for more of your work...
Severn
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2 posted 11-28-1999 06:04 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

It's great to have the ability to see something inspiring and instantly be able to write about it - great work and welcome to Passions - I also will be looking for more of your poetry.
danni
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3 posted 11-28-1999 10:32 AM       View Profile for danni   Email danni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for danni

Thank you both very much. I will hopefully have more for you to read soon
lostboy
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4 posted 11-28-1999 10:40 AM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Oh, danni, this was really a vivid poem for me. I love lighting the candles and getting lost in the dance of the flames and letting your mind take you to other places. Nice capture!
danni
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5 posted 11-28-1999 02:14 PM       View Profile for danni   Email danni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for danni

Thanks lostboy. Threre is no more relaxing way to release the days stresses than by lighting a few candles and staring off into another place. Happy you enjoyed this.
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6 posted 11-28-1999 02:44 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Danni - I agree. Candles are mesmerizing as the flame flickers and glows.
This is a fine poem done with sensitivity and feeling.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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