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jedimaster5
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0 posted 11-28-1999 12:57 AM       View Profile for jedimaster5   Email jedimaster5   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jedimaster5

Introduction to an environment I rarely exist in.
The heavy smells clog my lungs and cloud my vision.
The range of sounds are very unfamilar.
People all around,
Talking and cohearsing.
I feel out of place with discomfort in my eyes.
I want to be under a patch of stars,
With winter nipping at my neck.
And then I sense something.
I shift my head to find this change.
My eyes scope out the room.
They stop.
Focus begins.
Everything else shuts down.]
I see.
I think...
She sits with such poise.
I watch as her own world entertains.
No outside distraction affects her motionless soul.
I gaze and wonder what would bring her eyes to mine.
I draw a blank.
I must turn away.
A song plays on the radio.
I stand and listen.
My lips correspond to every word.
I turn back to this girl who has captivated me.
Her lips move as mine do.
A smile forms widely on my face.
And for this moment, that one moment,
Hope thrives inside of me.
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WhtDove
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1 posted 11-28-1999 01:02 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

oops sorry, one of those double comments on accident.

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WhtDove
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2 posted 11-28-1999 01:02 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I liked this very much. Well? Did your eye's meet? did they, did they? hehe.
Love your screen name too...cool...The force is with you! haha

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jedimaster5
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3 posted 11-28-1999 01:04 AM       View Profile for jedimaster5   Email jedimaster5   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jedimaster5

they didn't and I guess they shouldn't of, I guess it just showed me that there are so many people in this world that we can be naturally drawn to, even when a word isn't spoken. ~Chadwyck
 
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