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Who's Gonna Love You ?

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Marge Tindal
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Who's Gonna Love You ?
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

Who's gonna love you
long after I'm gone?
Who's gonna hold you
and sing you this song?

Who's gonna be sorry
that I've left this town?
Who's gonna love you
when you're feeling down?

You'll still want my loving
long after I'm gone.
Just who's gonna love you
when the blues comes along?

When you're alone singing
the blues in the night,
who's gonna love you
till you get it right?

You're gonna miss me,
long after I'm gone.
You're gonna want me
to sing you this song.

You're gonna reach
for me in the night.
But, who's gonna love you
and hold you so tight?

I won't be here to love you,
for I'll be long gone.
So, baby, who's gonna love you
when the blues comes along?

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 11-27-1999 11:58 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very musical, Marge! I can just hear the music playing in my head as I read this one! Good job!

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Denise

Marge Tindal
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Denise - Thank you ! ! ! That's just the way it came to me ... singing the blues !
Thank you, thank you, thank you !

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Marge,
Very lovely poem
Marge, sing us a song!
Denise, you wouldn't believe her voice. It's beautiful.
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4 posted 12-02-1999 07:08 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I hope there's a sax playing here cause I can hear one..

HUGS

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Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...
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RainbowGirl - You got it ! Yes, yes, yes ... just wailing the blues out in the night. Thank you, gal.

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Definitely a song here Marge. Think Ron can add some sound to this forum? We all would make quite a choir.
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7 posted 12-02-1999 07:33 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

If he wanted to make my night ...
that would be a great delight !
Thanks for the great idea !

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