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Eloise
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0 posted 11-27-1999 10:52 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Eloise

Wandering about with time on my hands,
Just molding castles in the sand.
Who I am and hope to be,
The answer lives inside of me.

I dream of where I once did roam,
Of happy times and home sweet home.
And as I smile on the past,
I think of the one that did not last.

You touched my world as it spun around.
But then you left without a sound.
I guess you never really knew,
This heart I gave from me to you.

I was the one with the very sad eyes.
As the emptiness caught me by surprise.
My heart like a puzzle was waiting to be solved.
Not wanting to ever again be involved.

But then one day a message was sent my way.
And I finally put that sad mask away.
As the moon cast its light upon the scenes,
I was once again filled with brand new dreams.


[This message has been edited by Eloise (edited 11-29-1999).]
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Denise
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1 posted 11-27-1999 10:56 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lovely poem, Eloise. Very beautifully done!

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Ohme
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2 posted 11-27-1999 11:00 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

How could we survive without dreams? I enjoyed this while I did a little dreaming of my own.

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me, it will beat the heck out of day before yesterday!

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3 posted 11-29-1999 05:06 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Wonderful writing Eloise, very touching.
Eloise
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4 posted 11-29-1999 10:21 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Thank you Denise, Ohme, and Severn. I appreciate you reading and taking time to reply. I'm fairly new to Passions, but everyone here has made me feel very welcome.
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