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cates
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since 1999-11-27
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0 posted 1999-11-27 09:10 PM


Here i lay no home to go
it not my fault you all know
let me up just one more time
to try again and let me grow

I stay down here
to hide my fear
let me up just one more time
this in me will soon disappear

I am not alone
but have no phone
let me up just one more time
this here place is my home.

© Copyright 1999 cates - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 1999-11-27 09:15 PM


Cates - Welcome ... hope you will call this home. Nicely said, my friend. And, when I visit where you call home ... I'll leave a smile and a helping hand.

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cates
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 15

2 posted 1999-11-27 09:18 PM


Thanks Marge, your poem was kinda of an awaking from the past.
Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
Texas
3 posted 1999-11-28 08:27 AM


Hi, Cates. I too will be visiting! Welcome
Thanks for sharing you poem with us.

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me, it will beat the heck out of day before yesterday!


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