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An Ocean Of Emotion ... Set Adrift

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Marge Tindal
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An Ocean Of Emotion ... Set Adrift
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

Serenely sailing the sea of love.
The beauty of it surrounds me.
Oceans of emotions
suddenly confound me.

Tossed about
by the waves of doubt.
Set adrift ...
after a rift.

No more to sail
the calm waters of love ...
clouds of suspicion
hang from above.

All alone,
aimlessly afloat.
I need a new Captain
for my Love Boat !

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© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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Beautiful, touching, lovely!

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Denise

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Marge'
I've got a feeling you are at the helm.
I love your oceans of emotions. Is it really that rocky?
Elizabeth
Marge Tindal
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Denise - I love how you enjoy poetry.

Elizabeth - Meant to help someone who rides the rocky waters. But, I AM TAKING APPLICATIONS !

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Marge, my great-grandfather was a cabin boy on the Titanic. Do I qualify?
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Lovely!

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*Krista Knutson*

"If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie beside you as you dream....." ~Faith Hill: If My Heart Had Wings~


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Aye, Aye, Captain Balladeer .... application accepted.

Alwye - Thank you for the read.

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Glug glug - hope the ship never sinks!!!
This is lovely again Marge.
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ROCKY WATERS...? I'm in the middle of the Emotion Ocean on a raft! With 100 foot waves coming in. Great work Marge.

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If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~
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