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An Ocean Of Emotion ... Set Adrift
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An Ocean Of Emotion ... Set Adrift |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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An Ocean Of Emotion ... Set Adrift ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 Serenely sailing the sea of love. The beauty of it surrounds me. Oceans of emotions suddenly confound me. Tossed about by the waves of doubt. Set adrift ... after a rift. No more to sail the calm waters of love ... clouds of suspicion hang from above. All alone, aimlessly afloat. I need a new Captain for my Love Boat ! ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, touching, lovely!  ------------------ Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge' I've got a feeling you are at the helm. I love your oceans of emotions. Is it really that rocky? Elizabeth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise - I love how you enjoy poetry. Elizabeth - Meant to help someone who rides the rocky waters. But, I AM TAKING APPLICATIONS ! ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, my great-grandfather was a cabin boy on the Titanic. Do I qualify? |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Lovely! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie beside you as you dream....." ~Faith Hill: If My Heart Had Wings~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Aye, Aye, Captain Balladeer .... application accepted. Alwye - Thank you for the read. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Glug glug - hope the ship never sinks!!! This is lovely again Marge. |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
ROCKY WATERS...? I'm in the middle of the Emotion Ocean on a raft! With 100 foot waves coming in. Great work Marge. ------------------ If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~ |
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