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The Leaving

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vandana
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0 posted 11-27-1999 06:23 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana

The day you went away,
My heart broke into two
And I cry every night,
Scream aloud,
Wish upon the stars,
Wishing you were here holding me tight,
Why did you go?
Have I hurt you,
Souldn't have said the things to you,
Soory IF I did ,
Your leaving makes my heart cry for you,
Why did you leave?
You should have left a
note of goodbye,
I would have understand why you had to leave?
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1 posted 11-27-1999 07:17 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

A very emotional poem I sense the hurt. Welcome to the site.

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?
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