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Good-Bye(I'm leaving tomorrow)

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Lynn
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0 posted 11-27-1999 05:14 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lynn


I knew the time was coming,
well, now the day is here.
I'm leaving late tomorrow,
for a place I once held dear.

To many stresses this holiday,
I can't handle being at home.
I just needed a place where I
could gently wonder and roam.

I have to do some thinking,
spend some time alone.
Enjoy the sweetness of nature,
that I was once shown.

____________________________

After all the streeses of this holiday, my family thought it would be best if I went and stayed with my aunt. She lives in a very wooded area, with creeks and streams, and my mother thought it best if I went there and took some time to realax. I don't know when I'll be back, but hopefully it won't be too long.

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If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~
© Copyright 1999 Jennifer Lynn Bonham - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 11-27-1999 05:17 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Ah, try to have a relaxing time, Lynn. Enjoy the peaceful surroundings and let time do its work to heal your heart. I will miss you while you are gone. Take care of yourself.

Lovely poem, Lynn.
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Denise



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Cuddlez
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2 posted 11-27-1999 05:20 PM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

bye babe

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Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
Ohme
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3 posted 11-27-1999 05:42 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Lynn, I will miss you as well. Enjoy the richness of nature. I will be watching for your return.

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?
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4 posted 11-27-1999 05:49 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lynn - Beautiful words.

If you have serenity to find
rest assured you will ...
in the beauty of the woods
where your heart will be stilled.

The pen of nature
will write your rhymes at will.
Hurry back, when you are full
we'll be waiting for you still.

We will look for you
on the rising of the sun.
Rest, find yourself ...
and to us return.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lynn
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5 posted 11-27-1999 06:36 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn


Thanks everyone. I will surely miss all of you. I'll try to be back ASAP!

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If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~
amber
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6 posted 12-07-1999 03:18 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

i hope you get the time you need, we all have to have it sometime, enjoy, great poem.
Pepper
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7 posted 12-07-1999 11:09 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Sounds like a beautiful place to melt your stresses away Lynn.....you will be missed...

Lovely poem.......

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 12-08-1999 10:06 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Hurry back hon  
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