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lostboy
Member

since 1999-11-21

Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA

0 posted 1999-11-27 02:27 PM

She sees a silouette in the window
She drops her gaze to the bed
Needing to just understand it
Like a hunger needs to be fed
Desperate to pick up the pieces
Of the shattered heart on the floor
Traveling back to her childhood dreams
As she's done so much before

Talking to the people inside her
Like they're sitting around in the room
Saying only to go back to yesterday
When nothing was left to assume
She sails on the plans she was making
Destination unknown
Thinking that she's going to get there
'Cause she's already too far from home

Falling down a well of years
Coming to rest in fears
Dust on the roses, say goodbye
To her dying eyes

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

1 posted 1999-11-27 02:49 PM

I like this a lot. The phrase I like best,

The dust on the roses, say goodbye

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-11-27 05:23 PM

This is a wonderful, touching poem. Sad yet beautiful.

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Denise

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

3 posted 1999-11-28 10:53 AM

Wow! I almost thought this poem was about me

Another beautiful peace. I think its safe to say I am a fan of your work. Keep them coming!

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

4 posted 1999-12-02 10:15 AM

Beautiful and touching piece!!

Bridgette

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart."

jcthaman
Junior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 22
Hershey, PA, USA

5 posted 1999-12-02 03:30 PM

a good poem indeed!

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

6 posted 1999-12-03 12:39 PM

Very beautiful LB....I really love......

She sails on the plans she was making
Destination unknown
Thinking that she's going to get there
'Cause she's already too far from home.

Btw...thanks for b-day wish

Jennifer

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

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