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Justbleu
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0 posted 11-27-1999 11:39 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

You captured my heart
So exquistley
From the beginning
In such a way
I knew I would be
Forever entranced
With you I shall be
Together inside just you and me
Always with God in his hands
I do believe
With you I am happy
With you I am free
Smiling always
I feel whole and complete
Happier than I could ever be
You mean the world the stars and beyond to me
With your gentle care
I am truly aware
We are Forever embraced in a little prayer
With you and God
This triangle I do share

This is a sequel to another of mine....titled "The One"
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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart."

[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 11-27-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 11-27-1999 12:03 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Justbleu. Very lovely!

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Denise

lostboy
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2 posted 11-27-1999 01:54 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

This is really nice. It put a huge smile on my face and I need that today (I'm working!)
Justbleu
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3 posted 11-27-1999 03:31 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I'm glad I was able to put a smile on your face Lostboy!!

Thanks soo much Denise, as always!!

Bridgette
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4 posted 11-28-1999 12:42 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Justbleu: I love "We are Forever embraced in a little prayer"...

HUGS



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There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it...
danni
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5 posted 11-28-1999 02:01 PM       View Profile for danni   Email danni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for danni

Beautiful poem. It must be incredible to be able to feel that way.
WhtDove
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6 posted 11-28-1999 02:04 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Justbleu this was wonderful. What a triangle to be in. God at the top you can't go wrong!

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Severn
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7 posted 11-28-1999 05:50 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Nice to see you here again - and a beautiful poem too.
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Justbleu
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8 posted 11-30-1999 11:11 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

It can be an incredible feeling!!
Yep, I'm here again, I haven't been cuz, I moved to Oregon!! I miss home a lot though!!! But, oh well!!

Thanks everybody, I'm glad you like this!!

Bridgette

This place is sooo much fun!!!
I do like posting my poetry, but it is very cool to be able to read others poetry!!
Nan
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9 posted 12-01-1999 07:24 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Keep smiling, Bridgette - Nice job..
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