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Three Simple Words

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Beri
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0 posted 11-27-1999 11:35 AM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Beri

Screams of silence into the night
Vaporize and disappear.
Only three words I wabt you --
I need you, to hear.
All will be turmoil until
"I need you," lands upon your ear.
Then your response which echoes
Back softly, I don't want to hear.
The heart-wrenching "No" shall only
Bring forth a tear.
And so I condemn my heart
To a life of torturous fear,
All due to three simple words
I need you to hear...
© Copyright 1999 Beri - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-27-1999 12:02 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sadly touching poem. Very well expressed! Welcomd to Passions!

(check typo of 'want' in 3rd line)

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Ohme
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2 posted 11-27-1999 07:00 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Sad but wll done. Glad to have you

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Welcome to passions
RainbowGirl
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4 posted 11-28-1999 12:24 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Beri: So sad and it's a rotten feeling when you can't speak the language of your heart..

Big hugs to you

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There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it...
Beri
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5 posted 11-28-1999 11:13 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

Thank you all for the welcomes. Thanks rainbow for the hugs, much welcomed by me. :-)
ThUnDeRkYsS
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6 posted 11-28-1999 11:26 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Totally agree with RainbowGirl on this one... It really sucks to not be able to say all you need to, especially when the other is clearly not ready to hear it, say anything to know what to do with it if they did. Sad, and well written at that

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