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vandana
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0 posted 1999-11-27 11:33 AM


God made your eyes so beautiful,
So beautiful that anyone can fall in love with you,
Your eyes twinkle like the stars at night,
That one would want to make a wish upon them,
In my dream, I saw your beautiful eyes were smiling at me,
Your eyes and my eyes met in the same place,
And in the grace of god sent us from heaven
To fall in love,
Your eyes ,
All the questions I had before were answered,
You showed me light of love,
That can't burn them away,
Can't take your heart and soul away,
Do you know why I'm feelin this way,
Tell me If I can see the morning that are shown in your eyes,
Tell how is It possible to see so much in your eyes

© Copyright 1999 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Mike
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1 posted 1999-11-27 11:40 AM


Very nice vandanna... I really enjoyed.. this is one of my favorites of your poems.
Denise
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2 posted 1999-11-27 11:41 AM


Yes, I agree with Mike! Soooooo beautiful!

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FreeByrd
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3 posted 1999-11-27 12:30 PM


Also my favorite, so far.

Getting Bigger and Better all the time.

Keep up the Great work.

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