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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
I closed my eyes And you came back to me With a vow of your sweet love forever You gave me your key We talked for hours Made love all night long The telephone rang, brought me back In a flash you were gone I leaned back in my chair I stared at that blank wall Remembering your soft touch and thinking I could have had it all You appeared and spoke to me My love, can I have this dance My boss yelled "hey get back to work" You disappeared with my last chance |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Now you know you shouldn't be daydreaming at work!  Great poem, lostboy! Loved it!------------------ Denise |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
I need to remember that d, thanks for waking me up!!! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I likes this one lots!!!  Keep them coming, K?? Thanks for sharing this, oh and by the way she is soooo right, you really mustn't daydream at work now!!! Bridgette ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart." |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
K Justbleu. Glad you like it dear and I'll "try" not to daydream at work. Key word:try! |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
I like this as well ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
And I thank you as well Ohme! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
If while not at work you could not dream What kind of a life would this be I myself love to think about wonderful things While this sometimes dreary world is boring me I was honestly kidding about your dreaming... Continue on Lost one Bridgette |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Mornin' Bridgette, I knew you were kidding! Thanks for that cool little verse, have a great day! Dream on....... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Sounds like a great way to pass the day but make sure you don't get caught next time..*g* HUGS ------------------ There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it... |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Not to worry, I'm alone at work today, hehe! Hugs back to ya, thanks rainbow! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
lostboy We all have dreamed the night away Lost in fanatasies til day But greatest love on wings has flown More sweet than any dream I've known Enjoyed your poem Elizabeth |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
We all need some form of escape from the daily run- of- the mill life, Daydreams are healthy...they relief stress and put a smile on your face. Most of my poems are inspired by daydreams! I loved your poem... |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
Lostboy, I too love to daydream. I loved this poem. Keep up the great work. |
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sraet Junior Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 31 |
Sometimes daydreams can be much better than the reality we are in. Enjoyed it! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I agree, daydreams can often be much better than the real world...exellent work! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "When you start falling, who's gonna catch ya? I'm willing to betcha, it will be me." ~Faith Hill: It will be me~ |
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