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lostboy
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0 posted 11-27-1999 09:46 AM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for lostboy

I closed my eyes
And you came back to me
With a vow of your sweet love forever
You gave me your key

We talked for hours
Made love all night long
The telephone rang, brought me back
In a flash you were gone

I leaned back in my chair
I stared at that blank wall
Remembering your soft touch and thinking
I could have had it all

You appeared and spoke to me
My love, can I have this dance
My boss yelled "hey get back to work"
You disappeared with my last chance
© Copyright 1999 lostboy - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 11-27-1999 12:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Now you know you shouldn't be daydreaming at work! Great poem, lostboy! Loved it!

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Denise

lostboy
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2 posted 11-27-1999 01:47 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

I need to remember that d, thanks for waking me up!!!
Justbleu
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3 posted 11-27-1999 03:39 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I likes this one lots!!!

Keep them coming, K??

Thanks for sharing this, oh and by the way she is soooo right, you really mustn't daydream at work now!!!

Bridgette

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart."
lostboy
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4 posted 11-27-1999 03:46 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

K Justbleu. Glad you like it dear and I'll "try" not to daydream at work. Key word:try!
Ohme
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5 posted 11-27-1999 03:51 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

I like this as well

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?
lostboy
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6 posted 11-27-1999 04:11 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

And I thank you as well Ohme!
Justbleu
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7 posted 11-28-1999 09:47 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

If while not at work you could not dream
What kind of a life would this be
I myself love to think about wonderful things
While this sometimes dreary world is boring me

I was honestly kidding about your dreaming...
Continue on Lost one

Bridgette
lostboy
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8 posted 11-28-1999 09:59 AM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Mornin' Bridgette, I knew you were kidding! Thanks for that cool little verse, have a great day! Dream on.......
RainbowGirl
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9 posted 11-28-1999 11:32 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Sounds like a great way to pass the day but make sure you don't get caught next time..*g*

HUGS

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There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it...
lostboy
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10 posted 11-28-1999 11:46 AM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Not to worry, I'm alone at work today, hehe!
Hugs back to ya, thanks rainbow!
Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 11-28-1999 12:05 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

lostboy
We all have dreamed the night away
Lost in fanatasies til day
But greatest love on wings has flown
More sweet than any dream I've known

Enjoyed your poem
Elizabeth
A Romantic Heart
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12 posted 11-30-1999 01:12 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

We all need some form of escape from the daily run- of- the mill life, Daydreams are healthy...they relief stress and put a smile on your face.

Most of my poems are inspired by daydreams!

I loved your poem...
Dolphins3
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13 posted 11-30-1999 11:13 AM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dolphins3

Lostboy, I too love to daydream. I loved this poem. Keep up the great work.
sraet
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14 posted 11-30-1999 01:57 PM       View Profile for sraet   Email sraet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sraet

Sometimes daydreams can be much better than the reality we are in.

Enjoyed it!
Alwye
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15 posted 11-30-1999 09:24 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

I agree, daydreams can often be much better than the real world...exellent work!

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*Krista Knutson*

"When you start falling, who's gonna catch ya? I'm willing to betcha, it will be me." ~Faith Hill: It will be me~

 
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