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only want what you havent got

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amber
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0 posted 11-27-1999 03:58 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber

ive heard people say that,
the things you want most,
are the things you can never have,
is that true in your mind?

jsut becuase you know,
regardless that ill love you forever,
will it make it that much easier to walk away?

just becuase ive promised,
to give you as much time as you need,
to find yourself and your needs,
does it mean that youll give your time to someone else?

just becuase you know,
that ill build my entire life with you,
is that any reason,
to postpone filling the promises youve made?

just becuase you know i dont need anyone else,
does it give you the security to think,
that no one else will ever need me,
so your positon is eternal?

just becuase the newness is gone,
and our relationship has grown,
does that give you the right,
to want to turn back time?

you know that you have me,
so is the saying true,
would you want to love me more,
if i didnt love you?
© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
Cuddlez
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1 posted 11-27-1999 10:15 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Love your poem Love your poem. Love your poem. Need I say more?

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lostboy
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2 posted 11-27-1999 10:22 AM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

with a pasionate heart such as yours, only one so blind couldn't see it.
Loved your words here Amber.
Denise
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3 posted 11-27-1999 12:32 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Great poem, Amber, with lots of great questions!

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Denise

amber
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4 posted 11-29-1999 04:45 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

questions i often ask of myself and of my love. thank you all so much i appreciate your understanding and enthusiasm for my poetry it means more than you know.
 
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