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Cuddlez
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0 posted 11-27-1999 01:16 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cuddlez

Not Exactly
We're not exactly strangers
We're not exactly friends.
We're not exactly lovers.
We're not exactly girlfriend/boyfriend
We're not exactly exes.
We're not exactly in love
We're not exactly in hate
We're not exactly a couple
We're not exactly broken up
We're not exactly harmonious
We're not exactly discordanent
We're not exactly happy
We're not exactly sad
We're not exactly forgiven
We're not exactly angered
Then what are we? I ask
We're a strange combination
A mystical delight
We are lovers who remain friends
And still kiss and cuddle
We're who we are
And as much as I would like to go back
I know
We aren't exactly lovers


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Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
© Copyright 1999 Cuddlez - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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1 posted 11-27-1999 01:57 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Welcome Cuddlez! Liked your poem.
I think this would go great in our open forum #4. I will be moving this post to Open Poetry #4 where it will receive better replies.
Again WELCOME to Passions!!
I didn't have your email, so if you have any questions please feel free to email me!

[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 11-27-1999).]
Denise
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2 posted 11-27-1999 02:04 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I like this one too, Cuddlez!

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Denise

deleeme
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3 posted 11-27-1999 06:21 AM       View Profile for deleeme   Email deleeme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit deleeme's Home Page   View IP for deleeme

In human relationships there are all kinds/forms/degrees of love which work for some and not others; which suit somes needs but leave others feeling cold and barren. You poem is interesting from that standpoint-I prefer an all-embracing, unquestionable love--but how often does that happen?

Thanks for your poem.
Cuddlez
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4 posted 11-27-1999 10:14 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Well, this type of love is good for me at this time in my life. I don't want a real relationship as bf/gf and I don't not want to have him in my life. Right now, its carpe diem and smile... I take what I can get. Its turning into more again. But this time there's more trust and understanding. I understand your viewpt...:-)
femtastic
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5 posted 11-27-1999 11:58 PM       View Profile for femtastic   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for femtastic

Hope something happens where you either become JUST friends or bf/gf again. The dragging it on thing could suck... If someone else asked you on a date would you go or would you feel you had loyalties to him? Would he feel the same?
jedimaster5
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6 posted 11-28-1999 01:07 AM       View Profile for jedimaster5   Email jedimaster5   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jedimaster5

I like.I wish you luck in finding your exact niche within this "relationship," I'm sure in the end, it will turn out for the best. ~Chadwyck
Cuddlez
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7 posted 11-28-1999 02:07 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Thanks for your advice and sympathy:-)

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Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
femtastic
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8 posted 11-28-1999 08:32 PM       View Profile for femtastic   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for femtastic

how pathetic
femtastic
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9 posted 12-01-1999 09:09 PM       View Profile for femtastic   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for femtastic

ya
Beri
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10 posted 12-01-1999 09:44 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

I loved this, and I know I have been there and know what you mean by this. Great job!!!
femtastic
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11 posted 12-18-1999 01:51 AM       View Profile for femtastic   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for femtastic

thanks beri. You always read and reply to cuddlez poems. Is there a certain reason why?
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