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untitled, un-love, when love stinks; a poem

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jedimaster5
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0 posted 11-27-1999 01:49 AM       View Profile for jedimaster5   Email jedimaster5   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jedimaster5

Aversion hath struck again.
My soul torn in two,
With regarding thoughts of you.
At once,
I thought I could grasp the rose so easy,
And all this time I thought my journey had been diminishing?
Losing focus on the entirety and to broaden what is wanted,
Steering my hand astray,
Grabbing so tightly onto the thorns,
My hand left a bloody mess,
A crimson river gashes from the seat of passion,
I once called a heart.
Am I the fool?
The sole benefactor that pours one’s spirit into a golden chalice,
And to watch as it is partaken,
Only to have it spit out,
Burning the orator,
Leaving painful scars and desolate memories.
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1 posted 11-27-1999 01:51 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wonderful poem! Very emotional. I enjoyed reading this. Welcome to Passions!

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Its a mistake not to love. An sin not to dream
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