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Cuddlez
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0 posted 11-27-1999 12:40 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cuddlez

Notice when you join a group
And the group is still clickish?
Notice when you cry or stumble
no one is there to help?
Notice when you desperately crave replies
no one answers?
Notice when the candle is flickering
there is no way to put it out?
Notice when someone commits suicide
everyone says I was too busy to care?
Notice the look on their faces at the funeral
when someone tells them she considered you her best friend?
Notice that people usually care a lot more
when its too late
Ever notice life is fleeting
And reckless driving can take it?

[This message has been edited by Cuddlez (edited 11-27-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Cuddlez - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 11-27-1999 12:56 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, all too sad but true. Well done piece of writing, Cuddlez. You hit the nail on the head.

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Denise

Cuddlez
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2 posted 11-27-1999 01:03 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Thanks for your reply. Its something I noticed again on the boards tonight, the accepted members have millions of replies and the newer ones have one or two. Again, thanks
:-)
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Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

[This message has been edited by Cuddlez (edited 11-27-1999).]
Denise
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3 posted 11-27-1999 01:12 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

It just takes a little time for everyone to get to know you! And you'll notice that people will become familiar with you faster the more you reply to other's posts! They'll take note of your name and seek out your postings! Everyone here is really nice. You're going to love it here!

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Denise

Nan
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4 posted 11-27-1999 09:09 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Cuddlez, I'd like to extend a personal welcome to the Passions Forums. We're all happy to have you here. A new perspective is always welcome here. Just get your name out there - Post... Comment... Visibility is the key... You'll be noticed for sure...

Cuddlez
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5 posted 11-27-1999 10:20 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Thanks Nan. And a ray of sunshine and a smile to you too.:-)
femtastic
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6 posted 11-27-1999 05:14 PM       View Profile for femtastic   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for femtastic

Why are you changing subjects so rapidly? Its kind of weird and I DONT understand it
femtastic
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7 posted 11-27-1999 05:14 PM       View Profile for femtastic   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for femtastic

Why are you changing subjects so rapidly? Its kind of weird and I DONT understand it
Ohme
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8 posted 11-27-1999 05:53 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Sorry, Cuddlez. Will try to do better.!
You have posted a very emotional and thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?
Dark Angel
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9 posted 11-27-1999 06:10 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

A very sad poem Cuddlez, but so very true.
Welcome to Passions, looking forward to reading more of your works.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Lynn
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10 posted 11-27-1999 06:32 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn

Cuddlez...This is a very sad piece, and thanks for sharing. Welcome to passions.

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If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~
WhtDove
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11 posted 11-28-1999 12:58 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Too bad we all tend to not realize things until it's too late.
Just like they said, it takes a while around here, but if you reply to others and post, you will be noticed. Trust me, I felt the same way when I first got here. But it has become my home, and there are lots of wonderful people here. I know you'll love it as we come to know you better and you us.

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femtastic
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12 posted 11-28-1999 08:34 PM       View Profile for femtastic   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for femtastic

are we supposed to feel sorry for cuddlez? im sorry, but theres worse things in the world to worry about
Pepper
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13 posted 11-28-1999 09:02 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

You gave the reader lots to think about with this piece....enjoyed the read Cuddlez and Welcome to Passions...

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

femtastic
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14 posted 11-29-1999 05:42 PM       View Profile for femtastic   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for femtastic

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suthern
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15 posted 11-29-1999 06:11 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Interesting poem... and welcome!

As for the number of replies to members who've been here a while, remember their reputation wasn't established overnight. Every one was a newbie at some point... Hang in there and respond to others... you'll build your own audience and find your own favorites!
Elizabeth Santos
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16 posted 11-29-1999 06:15 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Cuddlez
There's so much truth in so many of the lines you write, I wasn't sure til the end where it was heading and then - a tragic truth
Very well done
Elizabeth
femtastic
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17 posted 12-01-1999 09:04 PM       View Profile for femtastic   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for femtastic

this is such a laugh you consider this poetry?
 
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