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The hating of an object

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Cuddlez
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0 posted 11-27-1999 12:17 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cuddlez

Has any one ever felt this way even though they know its not the object they are mad or sad at but the person themself?
The hating of an object
I hated that old truck
It brought me the worse sort of luck
A subject lughtly broached at first
Quickly became an unquenchable thirst
Instead of, I'll spend time with you
I was left alone, sad and blue
The truck needs help, fixing and restoring
How could an heap of rust be alluring?
That it was I'm striving to understand
Alas, the truck is now your mate
And I am a memory, an one night stand

Matt, if you read this, then you'll know exactly what I'm talking about


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Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

[This message has been edited by Cuddlez (edited 11-27-1999).]
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Denise
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1 posted 11-27-1999 12:46 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Why, well yes I have!! Such sillies we humans are aren't we?! You have expressed very well the frustration caused by those things! And Welcome to Passions, Cuddlez!

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2 posted 11-27-1999 01:42 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Well I have to admit I really don't like this poem. Its not my usual writing style and it reminds me of a bad time I had, but.... Thanks for the reply
And as for being silly, I am but thats one of those things that makes me say
"Aint life grand?"


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3 posted 11-27-1999 01:44 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yeah, it has its moments! hehehehehe

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4 posted 11-27-1999 01:57 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

And I'm living one of them right now. I should add on to the poem
This one night stand has moved on
No longer do my hopes rest upon
The thought of a miracle one
She has realized there is more to life
Than listening to others toils and strife
Can you tell what I'm over?
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5 posted 11-27-1999 02:02 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

...just a guess...a one-sided relationship?

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6 posted 11-27-1999 10:18 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Not really one sided. He was too busy with other stuff, and I hung on. So now I'm pulling away and he's looking for more... Its going to be interesting to see what happens. The more to life part is fun to discover, too:-)
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7 posted 11-27-1999 11:54 PM       View Profile for femtastic   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for femtastic

I love this view on life. I had a similar problem only this guys thing was the tv
a truck no matter what you might think is better. At least he isnt sitting around being stuck to the couch
Lynn
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8 posted 11-28-1999 12:21 AM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn


I also had this problem, except he had an obsesson with his dog. He cared for it more than me. And the night he stood me up because his dog had a case of the "sniffles" was the night I said "Bye-bye baby"

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If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~
jedimaster5
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9 posted 11-28-1999 01:02 AM       View Profile for jedimaster5   Email jedimaster5   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jedimaster5

Hey, I really liked your poem, I love using analogies in poetry. They always seem to work so well and it did. Keep it up, ~Chadwyck ;')
Cuddlez
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10 posted 11-28-1999 01:58 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Thanks...:-)

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11 posted 11-28-1999 08:33 PM       View Profile for femtastic   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for femtastic

same as for 'not exactly'
Cuddlez
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12 posted 12-01-1999 09:06 PM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Femtastic please leave me alone
Cuddlez
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13 posted 12-01-1999 09:06 PM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Femtastic please leave me alone

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