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suicidal dreams
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0 posted 11-26-1999 10:40 PM       View Profile for suicidal dreams   Email suicidal dreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for suicidal dreams

This feeling is so unusual.
To know she feels for me as I feel for her.

This feeling of love.

Knowing my heart has been mended,
With the purest of golden silk.

This feeling of fullness.

Knowing I have one to share,
My pashions with, one to be with.

This feeling of life.

KNowing I have someone who,
Will keep the blade from my torn wrist.

This feeling of her.

I will cherish forevermore.

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life is short kill quick
© Copyright 1999 Tom - All Rights Reserved
Cuddlez
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1 posted 11-27-1999 01:59 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Love it. Short and succint

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Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
Denise
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2 posted 11-27-1999 02:06 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sounds like things are going well for you and your friend. I'm glad to hear it! Your poem is absolutely beautiful!

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Denise

Poet deVine
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3 posted 11-27-1999 11:35 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

It's great to know things are going well for you. You did a good job of putting your feelings into this poem.
Corinne
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4 posted 11-27-1999 11:42 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Innocence here, but also a darker edge...Love we cannot live without...


Corinne
cates
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5 posted 11-27-1999 05:59 PM       View Profile for cates   Email cates   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cates

I share those words also, thanks
Bathory
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6 posted 11-28-1999 06:24 PM       View Profile for Bathory   Email Bathory   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bathory

Tom I love you so much I want to thank you for freeing my sadness and pain.
Ohme
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7 posted 11-28-1999 09:03 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

The feeling of love is an unusual feeling!

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Lorene

Yesterday is history,
tomorrow just a mystery.
And if today is good to me,
it will beat the heck out of day before yesterday!

suicidal dreams
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8 posted 11-29-1999 08:31 PM       View Profile for suicidal dreams   Email suicidal dreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suicidal dreams

Yes this feling is unusual to me since its the first time one has loved me back.

Hey Kristi dont worry I keep the sadness and pain away forr eternity and we both know well live that long
for a vampyre never dies

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life is short kill quick
 
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