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Perhaps One Day

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Laura
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since 11-26-1999
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0 posted 11-26-1999 01:37 PM       View Profile for Laura   Email Laura   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Laura

perhaps one day i'll tell you,
of the love i have inside.
the fellings will come bursting out,
and then no more can i hide.

but what will you say? what will you do?
that is what troubles me so.
you could walk away or worse yet- do nothing at all,
and leave me feeling low.

or you could act somewhat in favor of me,
and say," i like you as a friend."
i will settle for that but it won't work that way,
and our so called "friendship" will end.

i wouldn't be able to take,
the ridicule of aiming so hi,
when i, myself, am so low.
it's time to decide- i've made up my mind,
perhaps one day i'll tell you,
but for now- You'll Never Know.

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Laura

[This message has been edited by Laura (edited 12-02-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Laura - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
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Canyon Country, CA


1 posted 11-26-1999 07:30 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

For a while I thought I wrote this LoL, I have felt the same thing many of times! All I can say is that if you arent positve you want to say anything, don't, wait till you are! Good job with this though, you expressed your feeling well on this!


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~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


Marilyn
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since 09-26-1999
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2 posted 11-26-1999 10:02 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Laura..I do believe I read this one in the teen forum. You have expressed yourself well in this piece. I do want to let you know the multiple posting is frowned upon here. Choose which forum you would like to post a particular poem in. Thanks.
DreamEvil
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3 posted 11-27-1999 04:28 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Excellent sentiment to this verse. I can identify with such reasoning.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)


 
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