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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 11-26-1999 03:30 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I'm back at passionate poet's door
Much quicker than I was before
I'm whipping out my quipping whip
And quipping much more quicker quips
Until my final quip is whipped
From whipping quips I will not quit
Don't quiet my quicker quipping lip
For I'll quickly whip a quipping quip
Elizabeth
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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 11-26-1999 04:12 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Madame Liz
you're quite a whiz,
Quipping whip in hand.
Go ahead, Liz
show me your stuff ...
whip up a quip,
if you're quick enough.

Whip that quip
and make it quick ...
I think that
you're very slick.
Just in case
you don't reply,
I'll catch-you-on-the-quip side
by and by.

On your lip
a quip,
send it to your
fingertips.
Engage it to the submit button
let's see if you're
full of mutton.

Whip that quip
and give it a flip.
I hope it quickly comes my way,
for if not
well, thanks a lot ...
I can't stay up to play.

*Come on gal ... I'm game.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 11-26-1999 05:07 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Marge you have a quipping lip
Flittly quipping whipping quips
But do not play with my quick quips
I'll show you my one-upmanship

I was late to find your quipping quipper
Or I'd whipped it out so much more quicker

Your quipping friend
Elizabeth
Dark Angel
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3 posted 11-26-1999 05:52 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Elizabeth, this is good, really enjoyed the read

BTW Marge I enjoyed yours too

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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4 posted 11-26-1999 08:49 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Quite the quipper whipper, you are.
Up at light of day.
Now gal, my pal ...
let's quell the quill
that whipped you in a frenzy ...

I'll just bet
it's what you et,
that has got you quipping,
So take a dose
of something grandiose ...
and quit your flipping quipping !

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
*Dark Angel -
Flip your quip
Miss Lizzie's way ...
See if you get
her to play.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com
Pepper
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5 posted 11-26-1999 08:52 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Quip on!!......'S'....


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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 11-26-1999 08:55 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Marge
I've quipping whip and rhyming mime
Who chimes a rhyme most any time
You can't hear the chimes I hear
'Cause I have got a miming ear

Elizabeth
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7 posted 11-26-1999 09:03 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Ah, ha !
A mimeing rhyming maniac!
I knew that you were a sucker.
Go ahead, I now proclaim ...
you are the quipper-picker-upper!

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 11-26-1999 09:29 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

My name is Bounty, I'll admit
And you cannot outquip my quip
I'll pick you up, I'll suck you in
And do it with a quipping grin

I'm quicker than you think, you see
I was busy posting poetry

Elizabeth
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9 posted 11-26-1999 10:27 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

I will be the first to admit,
you indeed have a quip-upper lip.
Do not let it interfere
with posting poetry
for us, dear.

The bounty is forfeited
I must now claim,
I'll wear the title
in this quipping game.

I'm too quipped to quote,
so don't even try ...
let the quipping begin
and whipping? ... not I !

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com
Elizabeth Santos
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10 posted 11-26-1999 11:06 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

A quipping quip I sent to you
But know not where I sent it to
It's whereabouts I know not yet
It's somewhere on the internet

It said that you are very slick
But I'm aware of you technick
Like a slithering serpant in your wake
A snake well knows another snake

Elizabeth
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 11-26-1999 01:25 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dear Elizabeth,
I thought I knew you very well
But now it seems, it seems,
I know not what your quipping means,
Or whether it means or seems?
It is a quip on words you say
But I wonder at the whipping flay
I'd think I'd rather the weather know
Or whether the weather,is if or so.
Elizabeth Santos
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12 posted 11-26-1999 04:39 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy,
I don't know what possessed me such a silly poem to write
I only know I did it in the middle of the night
And understand I'm under very heavy medications
That can cause confusion and at worst hallucinations
Confusions always been an inherent part of me
But lately my confusion is just confusing me
I may not be quite accurate in all I say to you
But I get so much enjoyment in believing that it's true
Confusion isn't harmful, it's not an ugly beast
What's very real to me is not confusing in the least
So I don't know where the whip came from and don't know where it went
But with it or without it I am very quippy bent
So never fear I have no whip, accept appology
In the meantime I am studying meteorolgy

Elizabeth

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 11-26-1999 06:02 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Elizabeth,
There is no need for appology
And enjoy your meterorolgy
I find confusion good for me.
It blocks out all the misery.
The poem is excellent
It shows the wit of vent.
Dr.Moose1
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since 09-05-99
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14 posted 11-26-1999 08:59 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

I must admit
I am confused
The pill I bit
Was it red or blue

If blue it was
I understand
If red I am
In no-mans land

Thoughts expressed
That are so clear
should help me find
Way outta here !
 
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