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Beri Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 149 |
Desire so strong Lust I cannot harness I wanna ride it Like an out of control creature Wild in the night Candles flickering in the wind It's blowin crazily now Carrying away my screams of delight Your name being yelled out in ecstasy Say goodbye to the dim light of the candles Alone now -- completely alone . . . |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Hey Beri! Welcome to Passions! Wunnerful poem, but since it IS a poem, I'm gonna jump it on over to the poetry forum! So for new replies, check Open #4!  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beri, I really enjoyed this, well done welcome to passions ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Ooh la la ! I liked this alot ! It had a little "sizzle" to it, and of course, I like sizzle since I moderate Adult!  Nice little ditty here! Whew!------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Beri - Welcome. This piece shows the promise of more to come. I like it. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Laura Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 26 |
YEOWZA! Well... you expressed yourself very nicely. Can't wait to hear some more! ------------------ *~*Laura*~* "Dream over me with a tear, anything it takes to wish me here. Magic and sweet lulabyes, any lucky penny will do fine to wish me here." -Nikki Hassman "Any Lucky Penny" [This message has been edited by Laura (edited 11-27-1999).] |
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