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Desire

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Beri
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0 posted 11-25-1999 10:11 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Beri

Desire so strong
Lust I cannot harness
I wanna ride it
Like an out of control creature
Wild in the night
Candles flickering in the wind
It's blowin crazily now
Carrying away my screams of delight
Your name being yelled out in ecstasy
Say goodbye to the dim light of the candles
Alone now -- completely alone . . .

© Copyright 1999 Beri - All Rights Reserved
Christopher
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1 posted 11-26-1999 03:16 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Hey Beri! Welcome to Passions!
Wunnerful poem, but since it IS a poem, I'm gonna jump it on over to the poetry forum! So for new replies, check Open #4!
Dark Angel
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2 posted 11-26-1999 05:55 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Beri, I really enjoyed this, well done

welcome to passions

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3 posted 11-26-1999 11:24 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Ooh la la ! I liked this alot ! It had a little "sizzle" to it, and of course, I like sizzle since I moderate Adult! Nice little ditty here! Whew!

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

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4 posted 11-26-1999 11:31 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Beri - Welcome. This piece shows the promise of more to come.
I like it.

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Laura
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5 posted 11-27-1999 02:35 AM       View Profile for Laura   Email Laura   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Laura

YEOWZA! Well... you expressed yourself very nicely. Can't wait to hear some more!

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*~*Laura*~*
"Dream over me with a tear, anything it takes to wish me here. Magic and sweet lulabyes, any lucky penny will do fine to wish me here."
-Nikki Hassman "Any Lucky Penny"


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