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You'll Never Know

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Laura
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0 posted 11-26-1999 01:29 AM       View Profile for Laura   Email Laura   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Laura

you'll never know my love for you,
or just how much i care.
you'll never know how my heart leaps,
just because you're there.

i love you from a distance,
i'm too afraid to come close.
because, rejection is unbarrable,
when it comes from whom you love most.

you'll never know how i adore your smile,
how i tingle when it shows.
and how i get a warm sensation,
running from my head to my toes.

you'll never know how i feel,
because my feelings will never be made known.
i tell you nothing of my love,
though it means being alone.

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Laura

[This message has been edited by Laura (edited 12-02-1999).]
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Dark Angel
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1 posted 11-26-1999 06:13 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

oh Laura, this is a lovely poem, but please tell that person, otherwise you'll never know

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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2 posted 11-26-1999 08:26 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

I must agree with Dark Angel. . . the torture is not worth it. . . sometimes Laura, you have to take the risk. . . I know that it's hard, but you must find out. . .

Strength my friend. . .

Sven

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Pepper
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3 posted 11-26-1999 09:09 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

I must agree with Dark Angel and Sven,
Laura....don't keep it a secret...
Thanks for sharing!...

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 11-26-1999 09:18 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Laura - Welcome to our corner.

You so aptly shared with us.
Time to share with him?
Don't do your watching from two blocks away.
The love in your heart shouldn't be kept in.

I think all who've read
and praised your rhyme agree.
Share it with the one you were thinking of
when you set this poem free.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com
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