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The Jackal
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0 posted 11-26-1999 12:18 AM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

im afraid to tell the moon
her sister has gone to ruin..
and i hate to see it moving
on the floor
the sweet taste of ignore
oh i wish the flies could see me now
wouldnt they be proud
of what we all allowed
its from the inside that you rot
remember that ..or not
for care is like the air
never caught but always there..



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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 11-26-1999 10:27 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

OOhh...I liked the last 2 lines especially! Very deep, and quite powerful read! Thanks for sharing it!!

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Julie
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2 posted 11-27-1999 12:50 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

I agree with Pff...care is like the air...well done Jackal.
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Ditto! Very good!

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