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Sweet taste of ignore...

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-11-26 12:18 PM

im afraid to tell the moon
her sister has gone to ruin..
and i hate to see it moving
on the floor
the sweet taste of ignore
oh i wish the flies could see me now
wouldnt they be proud
of what we all allowed
its from the inside that you rot
remember that ..or not
for care is like the air
never caught but always there..

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poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

1 posted 1999-11-26 10:27 AM

OOhh...I liked the last 2 lines especially! Very deep, and quite powerful read! Thanks for sharing it!!

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

Julie
Senior Member

since 1999-08-20

Posts 739
Houston, TX

2 posted 1999-11-27 12:50 PM

I agree with Pff...care is like the air...well done Jackal.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-11-27 01:13 PM

Ditto! Very good!

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Denise

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