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ex-terminator
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since 1999-11-25
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0 posted 1999-11-26 12:09 PM


a sad day it was my best friend left me,
I feel so small just the size of a pea.

she just turned on me and walked away.

puddles of tears at my feet, I can't hear her
voice ever sweet.

standing here all alone.
just as such sets a dreary tone.

pieces of me she just up and threw away.

that is why it's a sad day.

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Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
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1 posted 1999-11-26 12:25 PM


I liked this poem: succinct and yet packed with emotion, not an easy task!


Corinne

Jewl_24_1999
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since 1999-10-24
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2 posted 1999-12-01 11:19 PM


very emotional, it hurts so to lose a friend.
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