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Walking on Wind

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Corinne
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0 posted 11-25-1999 04:31 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Corinne


Childhood memories
Umbrellas clutched
In small hands
Blustery, rainy day
Stormy charcoal seas
Mirror the sky

Wet crust on sandy beach
Siblings in a race
Desperate to fly
Heaven within reach

Free, felt so free then
No worries, no cares
Just my brother and me
Walking on the wind

(c) 1999 Corinne Bailey


© Copyright 1999 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
U K Hero
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1 posted 11-25-1999 04:46 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

having lost many that weree once close, I was moved by this. Much loved Corinne, the last two lines brought a lump to my throat its the image that I picture.
Corinne
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2 posted 11-25-1999 05:16 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Thank you, U K Hero. That is probably the nicest thing anyone has ever said about something I've written!

Sorry though, to have reminded you of pain...

Corinne
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such fond memories
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4 posted 10-01-2008 08:54 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Corinne~
What sweet memories I found walking through the archives~
Lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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