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Starith
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0 posted 11-25-1999 04:11 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Starith

The heart never listens to reason,
Can't stop the changing of a season.

The world outside lays frozen,
'Tis this path I have chosen.

A path of pain and despair;
I know you don't really care.

I love you comes so easy to your lips
My heart and soul that statement does grip.

While you, with your sweet caress,
Lead me into bitterness,

I close my eyes and await the pain
For my heart chose not to break your chain.

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RainbowGirl
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1 posted 11-25-1999 04:30 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Starith: Long time since I've seen you...I can't think of a title except excrutiatingly painful and I'm not sure that's a good title but does pain ever have a good one..

Well written

HUGS

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Corinne
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2 posted 11-25-1999 04:39 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Starith,

I think I know this person! Kidding aside,
what title jumped into your mind when you were writing it? That's usually what I go with...Now, the title that jumps out at me in reading it is:

Frozen

Nice to meet ya!

Corinne
Starith
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3 posted 11-25-1999 05:14 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starith

Yes Rainbow it has been a while...it seems my muse took a vaction and left me to ponder the pain with no release. Thanks for the hugs they are always welcomed. The pain I hope will soon fade.

Corinne: Thanks for the suggestion. I often write pieces that have no titles, and none ever come to mind either. I have the talent for writing my emotions but it seems I lack the talent for naming them.

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