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Dark Angel
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0 posted 11-25-1999 06:18 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

Jagged

Dead are the lovers
Who have punctured
Each ones heart
Words of hate
Occupies their mind
The love they had
Unable to find
Jagged knives thrown
With gritted teeth
And stares of stone
Aiming high to
Pierce the soul
Destroying the life
That each stole
The memories
Each heart contains
Will seep through
Thumping veins



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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


© Copyright 1999 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
caroline
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1 posted 11-25-1999 08:15 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

This is powerful, DA.

The memories
Each heart contains
Will seep through
Thumping veins

Great last lines, and love your title, too

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Time's fun when you're having flies~~Kermit the Frog


RainbowGirl
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2 posted 11-25-1999 10:26 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

DA: Are you ok my friend? I hope so

HUGS

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danni
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3 posted 11-25-1999 10:34 AM       View Profile for danni   Email danni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for danni

Very powerful poem. Reminds of the end of my last relationship.
WhtDove
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4 posted 11-25-1999 02:50 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Geez girl you really do need to talk don't you! I'm sorry Angel girl, I will be on later and we'll talk ok? HUGS big ones!!!!!
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 11-25-1999 03:50 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow....you know I can relate to this one my fried. SO sad and so powerful with emotions.
U K Hero
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6 posted 11-25-1999 04:39 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

powerfull emotions indeed well done Dark Angel.
Dark Angel
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7 posted 11-25-1999 06:08 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Caroline, Thank you, I appreciate your comments.
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danni, thank you.
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Ruth, yes Dear Friend I know, and Thank you for your comment.
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Rainbow, I really don't know. Thanks hon.
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WhtDove, thanks Angel.
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Thank you UK Hero.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Moonshine
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8 posted 11-26-1999 01:37 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

DA (((((((Great big huggs)))))))
I'm so sorry that you're feeling like this sweety and I'm sorry that you've been hurt like this. You know that you can always call me and talk to me anytime, please do. I'm worried about you. I wish I could give you a great big hug.
(((((((Huggs.......)))))))
Dark Angel
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9 posted 11-26-1999 06:30 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Moonshine, thanks Honey, I really do appreciate that. ((((HUGS)))) back.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Pepper
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Very powerful indeed and I also can relate.....very well expressed Dark Angel!...sending Hugs.......

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

Dark Angel
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11 posted 11-27-1999 01:19 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thanks Pepper, Thanks for the hugs hugs back

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Severn
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12 posted 11-29-1999 05:15 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Mmmm - sad when that happens. More than sad. Excellent poem despite the topic...
 
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