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Chaotic Symphony |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN 
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A murmur starts in the crowd And crescendo’s to a mighty roar Screams and cheers reach to the sky And darkness prevails onstage A thousand score eyes strain to see A glimpse of life upon the stage And see but shifting shadows Flitting busily from place to place Then from atop the stage A trembling wail rises As colored lights flood the stage The crowd goes quiet Tension builds higher Excitement is tangible there The music rises abruptly Machine gun riffs roar And solo guitars wail The music throbs in the air The crowd jumps and screams And is quickly drowned For the music is all Consuming all it engulfs the crowd ------------------ "'Cause there's a hunger, a longing to escape, from the life I live when I'm awake" - Creed - "Higher" |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Interesting posting...very true for most of the concerts I've been to. I like the way you worded this  |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Keep it up Abe! Good job! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie beside you as you dream....." ~Faith Hill: If My Heart Had Wings~ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Good description of the concerts I've seen. You made me feel there. Good work. |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Thank you all for your comments, I greatly appreciate it. ------------------ "Human pride sings a vengeful song, inspired by the times you've been walked on" - Creed - "What If" |
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