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Chaotic Symphony

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Dusk Treader
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A murmur starts in the crowd
And crescendo’s to a mighty roar
Screams and cheers reach to the sky
And darkness prevails onstage
A thousand score eyes strain to see
A glimpse of life upon the stage
And see but shifting shadows
Flitting busily from place to place
Then from atop the stage
A trembling wail rises
As colored lights flood the stage
The crowd goes quiet
Tension builds higher
Excitement is tangible there

The music rises abruptly
Machine gun riffs roar
And solo guitars wail
The music throbs in the air
The crowd jumps and screams
And is quickly drowned
For the music is all
Consuming all it engulfs the crowd




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"'Cause there's a hunger, a longing to escape, from the life I live when I'm awake" - Creed - "Higher"

© Copyright 1999 Abrahm Simons - All Rights Reserved
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Interesting posting...very true for most of the concerts I've been to. I like the way you worded this
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Keep it up Abe! Good job!

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*Krista Knutson*

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3 posted 11-25-1999 09:58 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Good description of the concerts I've seen. You made me feel there. Good work.
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Thank you all for your comments, I greatly appreciate it.

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"Human pride sings a vengeful song, inspired by the times you've been walked on" - Creed - "What If"


 
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