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evolution
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0 posted 11-25-1999 02:19 AM       View Profile for evolution   Email evolution   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for evolution


i want to swim in your water
but i would drown
so i wont get wet

i want to walk down your road
but ill get lost
so i stand at the fork

i want to climb your mountain
but i will
so i sit at the base

i want to soak in your sun
but ill burn
so i hide in the shade

i want to forget you
but i cant
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evolution
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1 posted 11-25-1999 02:21 AM       View Profile for evolution   Email evolution   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for evolution

theres suppose to be a fall in the mountain passage, sorry
RobertB
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2 posted 11-25-1999 09:52 AM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

another good one!!! Hey you can edit your own poems. Just click on the icon at the top of your message and you can go back and add or delete. That is one of the things that make this forum so neat.

Robert

welcome..and please post more

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I like this..sometimes we have to go out on a limb, take the chances
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