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mc
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0 posted 11-25-1999 01:51 AM       View Profile for mc   Email mc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit mc's Home Page   View IP for mc

So speak to me and dare to hear
all the things that are within
my heart is trembling, gotta see
that I'm mistaken for what I wish.

I hear my heart, confussed the least,
that I'm with you, my thoughts indeed
so fear no more and come to me
I wait for you, my theme is faith.

I lay awake with you in mind
I scream no more and yell your vow
I want to run and be with you
my words are true, my path unknown.

Beware of time and see the risk
I take it slow but can't delay
my soul's in need for a gentle voice
so you should see that I'm at stake.



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© Copyright 1999 Maricarmen Estrada Elosúa - All Rights Reserved
caroline
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1 posted 11-25-1999 10:44 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

I love the last stanza...very nicely done

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mc
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2 posted 11-25-1999 02:53 PM       View Profile for mc   Email mc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit mc's Home Page   View IP for mc

Thank you Caroline...
I feel great when I write but when people read it and like it I feel satisfied.
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I love this one!
 
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