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I once believed in the magic of love

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Ayla
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0 posted 11-25-1999 01:28 AM       View Profile for Ayla   Email Ayla   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ayla

I once believed in the magic of love.
That it was a gift from the heavens above.
I used to vision the two of us growing old together.
But now I understood that nothing is forever.
You have opened my eyes to the reality of life.
When you walked away with her the day you said goodbye.

I once believed in the magic of love.
That it was a gift from the heavens above.
But you took the magic away from me.
And now I dont believe that love is for eternity.


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Loving someone is never easy.Especially when your love is a secret...

[This message has been edited by Ayla (edited 11-25-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Ayla - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 11-25-1999 01:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sad yet beautiful poem. Very touching.

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Corinne
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2 posted 11-25-1999 02:15 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Damn! Why does love have to be this way?

I like the universal quality of this poem.

Corinne
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so sad
Isis
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4 posted 11-25-1999 11:34 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

I really enjoyed this Ayla and so sad

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
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Ayla
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5 posted 11-27-1999 03:08 AM       View Profile for Ayla   Email Ayla   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ayla

Thanks dsnyder,corinne,hoot and Isis for your kind comments.

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Loving someone is never easy.Especially when your love is a secret...
 
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