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Ayla
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0 posted 1999-11-25 01:28 AM


I once believed in the magic of love.
That it was a gift from the heavens above.
I used to vision the two of us growing old together.
But now I understood that nothing is forever.
You have opened my eyes to the reality of life.
When you walked away with her the day you said goodbye.

I once believed in the magic of love.
That it was a gift from the heavens above.
But you took the magic away from me.
And now I dont believe that love is for eternity.


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Loving someone is never easy.Especially when your love is a secret...

[This message has been edited by Ayla (edited 11-25-1999).]

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Denise
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1 posted 1999-11-25 01:37 PM


Sad yet beautiful poem. Very touching.

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Denise


Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
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state of confusion
2 posted 1999-11-25 02:15 PM


Damn! Why does love have to be this way?

I like the universal quality of this poem.

Corinne

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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3 posted 1999-11-25 03:46 PM


so sad
Isis
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4 posted 1999-11-25 11:34 PM


I really enjoyed this Ayla and so sad

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Ayla
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since 1999-08-31
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5 posted 1999-11-27 03:08 AM


Thanks dsnyder,corinne,hoot and Isis for your kind comments.

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Loving someone is never easy.Especially when your love is a secret...

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