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Nan
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0 posted 1999-11-24 03:58 PM


(This poem from my archives perhaps unveils the inner me more than any of my other work)

True friendship knows its own intrinsic bound,
The pinnacle a covenant unfound.

Perchance cerebral spirits meet,
Fulfilling thoughts and dreams in kind
To render yearning minds replete.

Thence wending on with arms in bind,
Mere touch supplanting idle prate;
No greater trust than hands entwined.

Enamored passions proffer sate
As ardent raptured hearts unite
In sumptuous repast of fate.

With surety of love in sight,
Two souls shall only then enjoin
In confluence of shared delight.

That perfect niche, a bond without excess
Yields ever symbiotic synthesis.




© Copyright 1999 Nancy Ness - All Rights Reserved
Munda
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1 posted 1999-11-24 04:17 PM


Nan, what can I say.....you made me pull out my dictionary ! LOL..nah, just kidding, this is truly beautiful and thanks for sharing your inner self. : )
Alicat
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2 posted 1999-11-24 04:20 PM


Though I've read this one before, back before these forums were, I still love it, then and now. Thank you for taking the time to dig through your archives to post this once more.

Alicat

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 1999-11-24 04:27 PM


Nan,
You the women
I'm the man.
Beautiful poem.

Pepper
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4 posted 1999-11-24 04:34 PM


Thank you for inviting us in...Very lovely Nan......

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 1999-11-24 07:19 PM


Nicely done my friend
Wolfgang
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6 posted 1999-11-24 07:41 PM


I have not read a lot of poetry lately but I just can't resist yours!!
Good stuff Nancy.

Andrew Scott
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7 posted 1999-11-24 07:51 PM



Denise
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8 posted 1999-11-24 08:07 PM


Just exquisite! Perfect symbiosis!

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Denise


Mike
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9 posted 1999-11-24 09:49 PM


Yes, I am in awe as seems to be the norm when I read your poetry.

[This message has been edited by Mike (edited 11-25-1999).]

Nan
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10 posted 1999-11-26 11:00 PM


Thanks all.... It's wonderful to see you, Wolfie... I know you're out there, but c'mon back now, hear???
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11 posted 1999-11-26 11:16 PM


Every time I see it, it gets better and better. Love this one.
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