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John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
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0 posted 1999-11-24 11:41 AM


To be the man I might have been..
Ah, wistful is the thought...
The maiden’s hand I did not win,
The wars I have not fought.

The canvas now unpainted-
Heroic deeds not done-
And epic tales and odes of old
That never shall be sung.

The path I left untrodden...
The conquests left unmade...
A legacy of failure left-
Which all too soon will fade.

The best which I can hope for
Ere from this life I part..
Is that my words, might touch and cheer
Another forlorn heart.

Perhaps some youth, unscarred by time
Shall catch a vision bright...
And mount and seek the Holy Grail..
Unlike this would-be Knight.

Perhaps, unsullied, she still waits-
Perhaps the silent drums
And fifes will thrill, and pipes shall shrill
When that youth finally comes,

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Live large, people!
~GS~
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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 1999-11-24 12:00 PM


Oh, Gunslinger ... too lovely,
just too, too lovely.

This youthful heart
would now transcend
to the man
you've surely been.



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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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2 posted 1999-11-24 12:49 PM


You never cease to amaze me with your wonderful poems. Every one a gem!

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Denise


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3 posted 1999-11-24 01:08 PM


I really like this one. Thanks for writing and sharing it.
Balladeer
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4 posted 1999-11-24 01:25 PM


Well, gs, life's too short to get done everything we'd like to..but I'd say you've had your share and wore a few hats in your lifetime. Excellent poet defintely goes on the resume.
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5 posted 1999-11-24 02:16 PM


Your words do touch and cheer... Well done!
danni
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6 posted 1999-11-24 02:56 PM


Your words have definately touched another forlorn heart. Another wonderful poem GS.
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