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A Little Walk

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Ohme
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0 posted 11-24-1999 10:03 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ohme

A Little Walk

Would you like to take a walk?
The path is long not wide.
But it could be a pleasant trip
if we were side by side.
Would you care to spend the time
just learning how to live,
finding out what we could have
and what we have to give?
I would like to take a walk
right to eternity.
But, if you can not go that far
then please don't walk with me.

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?
© Copyright 1999 Lorene Meadows - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 11-24-1999 12:27 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wonderful expressions Ohme

The walk through time of which you speak
Seperates the strong from weak
Many will walk when paths are clear
Though in rough times, they will not dare
But those who love us will abide
And hand in hand walk by our side
Dispite the wind, the snow the rain
Until we find our way again



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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)

Munda
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2 posted 11-24-1999 03:16 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

ARGH...the two of you are making it difficult on me ! ; ) I love them both ! : )
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3 posted 11-24-1999 03:22 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Ohme, Oh my, well done!
hoot_owl_rn
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Thanks Munda....I like it when a poem inspires me like that
Andrew Scott
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Kudos to the both of you! Well written and well inspired.
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Thank you for this little walk! Great poem!
Yours too, Ruth!

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Denise

Ohme
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Yes, Hoot. I like yours as well

Thanks Munda. You help keep me trying harder
Thank you Sunshine
Thanks for the kudos, Andrew
You're welcome, Denise

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?
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I liked this poem very much. Nice sentiments here!
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